So first of all, we must have confidence, and with our help, let our children's day come early. Since the child has strong expressive ability, let him "speak" the composition first.
Tell one thing, tell a story, or express your opinion ... guide the child to speak first! Don't even tell him it's a composition! You can take shorthand or record the child's words, and then help him sort them out and type them. He will be surprised himself-this is the "composition"! So I'm fine, too! Building children's self-confidence is the first step. With self-confidence, they will be interested and the next step will be much easier! 2, write "own" composition "own"-why do you emphasize it so much? This is related to our present composition teaching. At present, it is often to read the model essay first, and then let the children write according to it. Children can't say it, but they will feel this false feeling, which will make children hate composition.
In addition, the model essay is more perfect in language and story conception. Children feel the gap and think that they have no hope of catching up with others-we adults don't do hopeless things, and it is too difficult for children to ask them! Watching too many model essays may hurt children's self-confidence, or train them to write "eight-part essay" and lose their ability to think and summarize themselves. They always write according to other people's things, but they can't write any good articles. In recent years, great progress has been made in the reform of marking papers in college entrance examination, and our composition teaching can no longer follow the old path.
Therefore, let the children write their own compositions, and record and express what they see, think and hear. This is the composition! 3. To write "interesting" things, you don't have to ask your child how the composition is structured, linguistically and ideologically. Instead, write down what he finds interesting or some ideas that you think are fun. Children will get enough information about interesting things so that they won't feel "unable to write" when writing.
If you do this, the children themselves will be surprised-I can write quite well! I can write so much! 4. Get into the habit of "keeping a diary" and start keeping a diary. Write as much as you can, not afraid of running accounts. Then, according to the child's diary, find something that the child is interested in and let him tell you, and do it according to the method of 1 ... First, develop the habit of handwriting. In order to finish faster, children should think about what they should remember every day. Let children realize that writing is to write about their own lives, experiences and thoughts.
5. Guiding children to "observe" and "observe" is a very important link to improve their writing ability, because "observation" is children's own observation, so that they can feel deeply and write content. In the early stage of cultivating children's observation ability, help children remember it once or twice. What should we remember? Remember what he said in his mouth, such as writing an explanatory article-underwater world. What fish did you see when you went to underwater world? What does the introduction card say? What does this fish look like? What interesting story happened at the scene? What's this fish thinking? Which one is willing to be angry, to be alone, or to play with other fish? Wait ... remember, don't force children to observe, simple tips, even discussions and chats, unconsciously let children pay attention! Let the child have a cold face. "You observe and go back to write a composition"! Shit, this kid's not interested! Composition is a record and reflection on points of interest. If you are not interested, what about the composition? 6. "Publish" children's works. Publish children's compositions on the blog. Bloggers will give some encouraging words to children's compositions and then read them to them one by one.
Children have the psychological needs of being concerned and valued, and have the psychological needs of self-display. Then, in order to get more praise and attention, he will improve his observation and writing ability, and he will figure out what to write and how to write it, so that everyone will like it. Ask grandpa to read excellent composition, and when the visiting guests come, show the composition to the children. These are all good ways to motivate children ... 7. Reading begins with humor and brain teasers. By this time, children have learned to observe and began to ponder how to tell stories that others would prefer. At this time, give your child a little humor, jokes and brain teasers to read. These words are short, but they are possessed.
Through these contents, children not only cultivate reading habits, but also improve their ability to conceive and tell stories, and their composition level will also be improved by leaps and bounds. Cultivating children to write a composition is really an enjoyable process.
You will see the children step by step and rejoice in them. Let's not take this job as a big problem.
We frown and teach our children to write. Is it possible for children to write touching and vivid compositions? To sum up, make a list of relevant psychological elements for you to remind yourself: first, start from the children's interests and psychology; Second, quietly solve the child's writing obstacles; Third, help children in various ways; Fourth, let children experience and enjoy the fun of writing; Fifth, guide children with confidence and happiness. With these points, there is definitely no problem! In this way, I have helped many children improve their writing ability, from the first grade of primary school to the third grade students admitted to the university.
They have made great progress beyond my imagination. We can even think that children can write compositions! In fact, what children see, learn, feel and think are all new things, and they are very willing to communicate and share with you! Your child is in the fifth grade and has his own thinking and vision.
2. Do primary school students need to write a composition? It is very important for primary school students to exercise and write a good composition.
The language accumulation of primary school students is still in the primary stage. How to write a good composition, how to write a good composition, has become a big obstacle for them, so how to improve the quality has become their concern.
Steps/methods
read
Is to develop good reading habits. The books mentioned here should be the books you are interested in. As long as it is healthy and beneficial, I suggest you cover it all. The so-called "open book is beneficial" is the truth. Reading should not be confined to or related to textbooks.
After developing good reading habits, I suggest you read some books you need urgently in a planned way. As far as writing is concerned, primary schools can read more classic articles such as Pupils Reading Newspapers, Story King and Chinese Newspapers, while middle schools can read more classic articles such as Juvenile Literature, Readers and Some Celebrities. If possible, I suggest you get a library card or go to the bookstore often.
go to
Just go out. As the saying goes, read thousands of books and take Wan Li Road. If you want to write a good composition, it is not enough to read more books. I suggest you take a walk outside if conditions permit. Nature is a good writing material. You can take advantage of the holiday to go to parks, zoos, botanical gardens, and the countryside to walk with your classmates and parents. Pay attention to cultivating your observation and write down what you see and feel in time. Over time, you will have something to say, and your composition level will increase day by day.
think
Just think more. Writing a good composition is skillful and needs to develop the habit of thinking. For the good articles in the textbook or you see, we should analyze more, why the author writes well, what are the good places, whether I can learn from them in my future writing, and so on. Composition is something to express your thoughts, so you should conceive before you start writing and write out your experiences and feelings about some people or things. By the way, you can also refer to some excellent composition collections to help them form their own writing ideas.
practise
Just write more. The most important thing to improve writing ability is to practice more. We should form a good habit of loving writing. "Reading is like breaking thousands of volumes, and writing is like a god." Maybe you didn't write well enough at first, but it doesn't matter. As long as you are willing to start, your writing level will increase day by day. Here also want to emphasize the importance of accumulation. I suggest you develop the good habit of keeping a diary, and write down the good articles, words and sentences you see and read in a notebook, so that some famous books can be memorized.
3. Poor composition of primary school students can be improved by reciting model essays?
The affirmative answer-it can be improved, but it cannot form dependence. We should learn to learn from it, take its essence and discard its dross.
While reciting, practice writing by yourself. Don't be afraid to write. I have been familiar with it twice since I was born. Your writing ability will change qualitatively after a long time. By the way, let me introduce my experience to you.
How to write a good composition?
1, a good article comes from life, write what you see and hear; Write your own personal experience; Write your true feelings, so that the article will be vivid and touching.
2. Writing is not accomplished overnight. But in the face of today's exam-oriented education, we might as well learn some skills. For example, recite more paragraphs at ordinary times, with a good beginning and a good ending. To prepare for the exam.
3. Read more, study hard and learn from it. Good articles, good words and sentences, learn to accumulate.
4. Create a novel and unique article title. Sometimes you can get twice the result with half the effort.
5. Keeping a diary can not only practice writing, but also accumulate materials.
6. Learn to quote famous sayings and immortal poems to make your article more convincing.
7. Usage of good words and sentences. Good words and sentences used in the article can add color to your article and sublimate it. But it should be just right, not too much, too much will appear flashy.
8. apply what you have learned, that is, the ability to change, and change with the same.
9, close to nature, go out for a walk more during the holidays, see more and learn more.
10, being close to nature can also make your collected materials more colorful.
References:
I am original.
4. How to write the outline of primary school composition, refer to the model essay, which is an unforgettable thing. The most unforgettable thing in my memory is picking in the orchard, where I not only learned to pick, but also learned the truth of being a man and doing things.
Hehe, I am in a good mood today. Dad and his colleagues and I picked it. Originally, our family of three planned to climb Xiangshan, but that day my father suddenly received a phone call saying that the company organized picking. Although there is a lot of homework, I still can't help but be tempted. My father and I embarked on the road to Yongqing Picking Garden ... After about 30 minutes' drive, we came to the apple orchard. Wow ~ ~! There are so many kinds of apples. They are attractive in appearance, color and shape, round, like small lanterns. Hanging from the treetops.
Some apples are yellow, some are pink, and some are red. They are exquisite and beautiful, such as the face of a little doll, which makes people fondle it. Look at the green apples in the distance, they are green, as if they are about to fall into the water ... Dad happily threw me clothes, pulled up a short and long thick branch like a child, and jumped onto the tree lightly. At this time, people really return to nature. Every word you say to me, everyone's face is filled with a rosy smile like an apple. Time goes back, as if they were ten years younger ... happiness. At present, it is also an oil green. Occasionally meet fellow tourists, smile at each other and taste the joy of harvest. I can't restrain my inner excitement. Although it is not the first time to pick it, I still feel so happy to see mature fruits hanging brightly on the branches with a smile! I found a branch to hang clothes on, and I also tried to climb the tree. Haha, the angle of view is very wide, and it has a unique flavor, wonderful, wonderful! Put the apple on the branch.
This is an ordinary apple. One side is red, and red is yellow; One side is yellow, and yellow is reddish.
On its yellow skin, there are several "freckles" of different sizes. The short handle is hidden in the sunken place above the apple, like a poor person trapped in a quagmire, and like a shy girl who doesn't want to see anyone. Pick it up, I can't help but take a deep breath, and a faint fragrance comes to my nose. After a while, I felt relaxed and refreshed, and my bones were crisp all over.
I want a bite, but I can't bear to hurt it. After much hesitation, I finally got out of my mouth.
"Khaki" bites down, and the sweet taste is just right: slightly thicker, too sweet; A little lighter, it's too tasteless. Overflow in your mouth, with endless aftertaste.
Take another bite and the juice will dissolve into my blood like sweet honey. This is a bumper harvest. My father and I picked 34 Jin of apples. Although I am very tired, I am really happy! At the farmhouse, four bright red apples were destroyed in a row. The weather is cool and pleasant, and I feel great. At this moment, I heard Aunt Li calling my name gently at the door. I used to see her mysterious expression, and she said let me go with her. I'm really a monk-I can't figure it out. Follow her. We walked through a forest and a small house and came to the door of a family. Many sunflowers, it's autumn now, and their heads are heavy. They don't have the style of facing the sun in the past, but Huang Chengcheng's is very poor, but wait, what are we doing here? This doesn't seem to be a picking project. Haha, I see. Aunt Li wants to "borrow" sunflowers for a taste. It's hard to say. I'll set it up. You should borrow more. Everyone is greedy! Five minutes have passed, 10 minutes have passed. Why hasn't Aunt Li come back yet? You won't get caught, will you? I approached quietly, and the bargain aunt was still there, well, just because I couldn't reach the big sunflower plate. Hehe, this is a good opportunity for me to "show my talents". I walked over unhurriedly and gently pulled the sunflower down. Haha, it can make me happy and return to my original appearance quickly. In the final analysis, it is "having a guilty conscience." We run very fast (* _
As soon as I entered the house, I picked the biggest and reddest apple and put it on the table. It makes a "bang" sound, like a person's heart beating faster after exercise, shaking from side to side like a tumbler. Unforgettable is not only sadness, but also happiness.
5. Pupils travel essays, don't travel to Taiji Island written by pupils.
Taiji Island is located in the northwest of Liujiaxia, Yongjing County, where the scenery is pleasant and beautiful.
I am very happy to have the opportunity to visit there and enjoy the beautiful scenery there this time.
The car galloped on the winding mountain road, with green hills on both sides of the road, and the top of the mountain was covered with milky fog, giving people a feeling of "mountains in the sky". Suddenly, when the mountain road turned, my eyes suddenly became clear: the choppy Yellow River, criss-crossing fields and rolling wheat fields all flooded into my eyes. But the most attractive thing is the continuous peaks, which seem to be huge barriers. The top of the mountain is white, and the bottom of the mountainside is all red, as if it had been burned. I'm a little surprised because I've never seen such a mountain. Lushan Mountain is too revered and Huangshan Mountain is too dangerous. All of them have been artificially carved and finally endowed with artificial beauty. However, the mountains here are the wonders of nature, which gives them unique beauty. From a distance, there is a temple on the top of the mountain, which is said to have been built by a Nepalese monk. Buddha Sakyamuni gave him a dream and said a poem: "The red soil is white, and the river flows west. Agate trees are everywhere, and we will stay here. " Red earth and white mountain refer to this mountain, and agate refers to jujube. It's true. Jujube trees are everywhere here, and there are countless huge dates on each tree. In addition, all the water in the Yellow River flows eastward, while the Yellow River here flows westward. I couldn't understand it, so I went to ask my Lord, there is a reservoir here, and the river has changed its course. "We live here" means that the Buddha asked the monks to build a temple here for chanting and lecturing.
The car went on, much slower than before. Willows are swaying by the roadside, and dense reeds are swaying gently in the breeze. After a long time, the car finally stopped by the lotus pond. The lotus pond is covered with lotus leaves, leaving only a gap. I couldn't help saying a poem by Yang Wanli: "The next day, the lotus leaves are infinitely blue, and the next day, the lotus flowers are different colors." Lotus leaves flutter gently in the gentle touch of the breeze, and some lotus flowers are in bud and some are in full bloom. 35SK35 Composition Network Pink lotus and lotus are intertwined, lotus branches are staggered, and graceful posture is swaying in the wind. Flocks of fish swim to the shore for a while and play under the lotus leaves for a while. At this time, a little gray duck was swimming in the upper reaches of the water, suddenly diving into the water to fish, and ripples appeared on the calm water. A crane was standing in the water, too. It stopped to watch, as if fascinated by the beautiful scenery. Another crane came and stood in the water, combing its feathers with its long, pointed mouth. Several egrets flew through the air, making several chirps from time to time. It's really "a line of egrets going up to the sky". A kingfisher passed before our eyes and stopped on a branch not far from us. Its dark green feathers, pointed mouth and mung bean-like eyes are very cute. This is the first time I have seen a kingfisher, so I am more excited.
There are red wind lotus, lively fish, lovely waterfowl and wild ducks here, and it is unforgettable to feel the breath of nature.
Then we went to Bird Island, where there are countless kinds of birds. We went boating along the coast by boat. My uncle whistled and the bird flew. Once or twice, my uncle continued to whistle, and the birds kept flying, red, flowered, black, dazzling and overwhelming. It is because birds nest here that the flowers and trees here are lush and beautiful!
At noon, we eat, rest and entertain in a farmhouse restaurant in Zaoyuan, which is a return to nature!
In short, everything here is full of eclectic beauty. People who come here will throw away the vulgarity in the market and return to the truth from here. The 60-year-old man devoted himself to fishing by the river. The girls in the city took several children to catch butterflies and pick wild flowers. Young people are climbing mountains and swimming in the Yellow River. ...
How time flies! Unconsciously, it was dusk. Facing the afterglow of the sunset, we reluctantly left here, and this beautiful scenery will remain in my heart forever.
I don't know when I can come to this beautiful Taiji Island again.
6. The writing of primary school students' compositions requires the writing of primary school students' compositions. Mainly learn to write simple narratives and practical articles commonly used in daily life. Be sure to write your true feelings and develop a clear, accurate and vivid style of writing, and specifically list the following six requirements. For reference.
1, the content should be specific. When you write a paragraph or an article, if you want to tell others what you want to say, just write it down and don't talk empty words.
2. Be realistic. When writing a sentence, a paragraph or even an article, you should honestly write down what you want to write and say, and you can't exaggerate at will.
3. it depends on the object. When writing a composition, you must think about who the article is written for, and you must have clear pertinence. People who write articles must think of people who read them.
4. Pay attention to the choice of language. When you write a sentence or a paragraph, you must think about how to write it in order to express what you want to say accurately and vividly, and use appropriate sentences and expressions. Pay attention to the standardization of words.
5. Pay attention to consistency. An article always has a beginning, a middle and an end. Think about what is the center of this article. Around this center, what to say first, then what to say, and finally what to say, so that people can understand.
6. Revise after writing. Pay attention to whether there are any sentences that can't keep up, improper words, typos and punctuation errors. Read on sentence by sentence and make the article better.
Composition writing is mainly about writing more and practicing more to form a good habit.
7. Ask pupils to love composition.
Who kept me up when I couldn't write 26 English letters well?
I just transferred from Guangzhou to Shanghai last semester in Grade Three. At that time, I couldn't even pronounce some common words correctly, and I couldn't figure out some simple grammar. It goes without saying that teaching such students means that teachers should work harder.
Once, I recited an English text, and a word was not pronounced correctly. Teacher Ding helped me correct it over and over again. Because of nervousness, I still can't read correctly, and my forehead is sweating. Teacher Ding took pains to teach me until I could pronounce correctly. There are countless such things.
I remember another time, I couldn't do several English exercises. After school, Mr. Ding made up lessons for me alone. It was dark, but Mr. Ding still taught me again and again, and an hour passed. My mother rushed to school trembling. As soon as I entered the classroom, I saw Mr. Ding still teaching me tirelessly. In this case, mother was moved. ...
When I came home, my father knew about it. He was silent for a long time and sighed: "What a good time, what a good teacher ..."
One day, my mother called Miss Ding to ask for sick leave for me. Teacher Ding said, "I received the letter from the baby's father." Only then did I know that my father wrote a thank-you letter to Teacher Ding. When my mother thanked Mr. Ding again, Mr. Ding only said, "Don't thank me, this is what I should do." What an unpretentious speech this is! I'm so touched.
I feel warm studying in this school because there is love everywhere. One day when I came home from school, I excitedly said to my mother, "All our teachers are as ambitious as you."
The teacher's love nurtured my childhood. It will also nourish my life.
References:
I am original.
Why not buy an aunt?
It's sunny. With his mother's permission, Bao Xiao and his father went shopping.
Father and son visited a supermarket, Lianhua Supermarket on Lindong Road. When I got familiar with the bus, I soon packed it: a bag of Sheyang rice, a bag of salt pickled potherb mustard, half a catty of fat and lean meat, a bag of Shaqima and a bottle of Jiepiling ... Next, it's time to check out and go home.
Just out of the supermarket gate, Bao Xiao shook his father's skirt as he walked, muttering, "Why don't you buy an aunt?" Dad asked, "What to buy?" "Buy an aunt!" Bao Xiao dodged his feet and said it again. Dad still didn't understand, so he quickly asked, "I don't understand. Do you want to buy? " Bao Xiao was angry and repeatedly said, "Buy an aunt!" "Buy an aunt!" "Buy an aunt!"
Walking on the cliff, dad stopped, leaned down and asked kindly, "Don't worry, son, make it clear slowly." Do you want to buy? " Bao Xiao hesitated for a few seconds, blushing and swearing: "Pyle!" "My father suddenly smiled, turned back to the supermarket and bought three Sydney from the fruit stand.
When I got home, my mother smiled and said, I really used the English words I taught at the critical moment.