Topic: Look at the pictures and write articles (war and peace)

Requirements: Observe photos carefully, combine thinking with problems, expand imagination, and write down what you see and think.

Tip: 1 Review the text, or learn about the war scenes through the film and television media and express your feelings.

Observe and imagine this group of topics closely, write down specific contents, and express your true feelings in fluent sentences.

3. Communicate your exercises with your classmates and read the revised composition to your family.

Model essay 1

An old photograph

Taiping district Xinhai primary school

Wang xiukun

When old photos are mentioned, many people will think of their happy childhood. However, the old photo I want to show today will remind you of the inhuman war 60 years ago.

1On August 28th, 937, the Japanese invaders bombed Shanghai Railway Station. This photo was the real scene taken by reporters at that time.

On this day, Shanghai South Railway Station, as usual, was filled with surging crowds. At this time, the voice of the enemy plane "Weng Weng" suddenly came from the sky. Before people woke up, there were several loud noises. Suddenly, smoke billowed from the railway station and the building collapsed. "The Japanese plane is coming", "Run and run" and "Mom and Dad ..." The cries suddenly joined together, and people panicked and were at a loss. But the enemy's bombing continued and the overpass collapsed. At this time, the railway station was in ruins. People stopped surging, and bodies fell in a pool of blood. The South Station, which was noisy just now, is now dead silent, and only a few low moans can be heard occasionally.

"Mom, there you are." "Dad, I'm afraid ..." At this silent moment, suddenly there was a little boy crying. He sat in the middle of the tracks, covered in blood, shouting with his mouth open. He looked at his parents covered in blood in front of him, wondering what happened, why his parents didn't move, and he didn't know that he would be an orphan from now on, and he didn't know how to live in the future. ...

Aren't the ruins and orphans in front of us all heinous crimes left by the Japanese war of aggression against China in China? Do lonely children keep proving that your "East Asian glory" in China is a lie?

We can't erase the shock in everyone's heart in China from this old photo, and we can vividly remember the scenes of the heinous crimes of Japanese aggression against China.

Comments: Starting with old photos, the article leads to the heinous crime of Japan's invasion of China. Through careful observation, the author captures the description of the little boy's appearance, and the lines are full of hatred against the Japanese army, highlighting the center and reflecting the author's thoughts and feelings.

Fan Wen 2

Children in ruins

Taiping district Xinhai primary school

Xun hongcui

This photo was taken on August 28th, 1937. The Japanese invaders bombed Shanghai South Railway Station. Crying babies and collapsed houses make us seem to have returned to the humiliating era of our Chinese nation being bullied.

It's a sunny morning. It's time for students to go to school and workers to go to work. It's time for the elderly and children to take a nap and have fun at home. However, due to the indiscriminate bombing by the Japanese army, many schools and factories in Shanghai have been bombed, and people can no longer go to work and school normally.

At this time, Shanghai Railway Station, because the North Station has become a war zone, traffic has been cut off, and the South Station has become the only exit for traffic, so Shanghai South Station is crowded with people. Suddenly there was the roar of planes in the air, and Japanese enemy planes flew in and dropped a lot of bombs. Shanghai Railway Station was in ruins in an instant, and the station, overpass platform and railway tracks were all blown to pieces. There are countless casualties in the station, and the ground is full of littered bodies. In the firelight, parents anxiously called for their children, and the children cried for their loved ones. The injured people groaned in pain, and the tragic cries of the children in the ruins were even more heartbreaking. A few minutes ago, the baby might still be coquetry in his mother's warm arms, playing with toys made by his father himself. A few minutes later, the aggressor's bomb destroyed everything in an instant. At the moment when the enemy plane dropped the bomb, the child's mother tried to cover the flying rubble and shrapnel with her body, and the child's mother was killed by the bomb. The lucky child couldn't recognize his bloody mother, so he began to cry loudly. But there is no mother's kind smiling face, and there is no father's usual strong hands to pick him up. The child's immature crying seems to question the intruder: Why are you so cruel, taking my parents' lives and my happy childhood? I am so young, how can I live in the future!

Yes, it was the war that turned the bustling market into ruins, destroyed people's originally happy homes and shattered children's childhood dreams. May this historical tragedy never happen again, so that children all over the world can have a happy and beautiful childhood, and the world will always be full of happiness and laughter.

Comment: By describing the content of the picture, the article introduces the reader into the war era. This paper focuses on the tragic situation of Shanghai South Railway Station after being bombed by enemy planes. Fully expressed the theme of advocating peace and opposing war. Simple language, expressing true feelings.

Fan Wen 3

Remember history and national humiliation.

Taiping district Xinhai primary school

Wang xiukun

On August 28th, 1937, Shanghai South Railway Station, as usual, many passengers were waiting for the train in the waiting room. At this time, the Japanese invaders dropped countless bombs at the station. Suddenly, the station was in ruins, the overpass was broken, the tracks were twisted, the houses were broken, and the ground was covered with bricks and tiles. At this time, there was a cry of a little boy, and his parents and relatives were killed by a bomb. Now that he is an orphan, his future fate and life are unimaginable. Perhaps in that war-torn era, no one would pay attention to him, he would wander the streets or even be on the verge of death, and he would not have a chance to avenge his dead parents. Maybe he will meet a kind person and bring him home. No matter what his life is like, he is an innocent victim, and all the people of China are innocent victims.

The Japanese invaders burned, killed and looted, killing more than 35 million compatriots. There are countless crimes committed by the Japanese invaders, and there are countless pictures like this.

We can never forget the inhuman massacre of the Japanese invaders and the national backbone that fought bloody battles in the massacre.

A woman writer put it well: "Forgetting the Holocaust is the second Holocaust."

Lenin warned us: "forgetting the past means betraying judgment."

Let's ring the alarm bell louder and louder, let the bell awaken our national spirit forever, inspire young people to grow into a new generation to realize the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation, let the bell cross the ocean, turn a deaf ear, take history as a mirror, call for peace, evil will eventually fail, and justice will eventually win. The people of China, Asia and the world will never allow the tragedy of being invaded and killed to happen again!

Comments: Through the simple description of the photos, my thoughts on the photos were led out, and my feelings were expressed. The language was sharp and thought-provoking.

Fan Wen 4

A painful lesson

Xun hongcui

Taiping district Xinhai primary school

This is a photo taken by 1937. On this day, the Japanese invaders dropped a large number of bombs at Shanghai South Railway Station. In an instant, the bustling Shanghai Railway Station was in ruins. The child in the photo cried loudly because of pain and fear. His relatives may have been killed by the enemy's evil bomb. Shanghai Railway Station is full of terrible scenes. Broken walls, bombed-out railway tracks, collapsed overpasses and helpless orphans all tell the brutality of the invaders.

Seeing this photo will make everyone with a conscience heartache. What the war has brought to mankind! A large number of hungry refugees, children who are out of school, collapsed houses, children who have lost their parents, homeless people and disabled bodies.

How will the children in the picture live in the future? Perhaps because of the war, babies who just came into this world will die prematurely. He left this world with fear, helplessness and haste, and had not had time to see many beautiful things in this world. If he is lucky, he may be adopted by a kind-hearted person, but the pain of losing his loved ones will never be erased in the child's heart. It is also possible that his parents were just injured by a bomb, and in the later life, they dragged their disabled bodies and led poor children to beg along the street. Shrapnel scratches are faintly visible on the child's begging arm.

Yes, this is a humiliating scene of the Chinese nation. It was precisely because our national strength was not strong enough at that time that the invaders dared to be so arrogant in our country. Young people are strong, and China is strong. Yes, the strength of our motherland depends on the hard-working hands of our younger generation. Never let such a historical tragedy repeat itself.

Comments: The article mainly describes the children crying loudly because of pain and fright in the picture, and makes various assumptions about the possible impact of war on their future destiny. Through this idea, the disaster brought by war to mankind is explained. He denounced the brutality of the invaders and expressed his good wishes for world peace forever.

Knowledge link

Write people by writing their language.

Human language can be roughly divided into monologues and dialogues. In daily life, the communication between people, the exchange of feelings and the expression of ideas are inseparable from language, so writers cannot do without language description. Language description expresses the inner world of characters through the description of their speech content and tone, so that readers can understand their thoughts, feelings and personality characteristics.

When describing the language of characters, we should pay attention to the following points:

(1) The language description should be accurate and conform to the age, identity, occupation and education level of the characters.

(2) Language description should reflect the ideological quality, personality characteristics and feelings of the characters.

"Words must be carried out", and the language of characters can help readers understand the inner world and ideological quality of characters.

(3) The language should be concise.

Some people spend a lot of pen and ink to describe the characters' language in order to fully reflect their thoughts and personalities, which is counterproductive and annoys readers.

In fact, language description cannot be recorded in words, but should focus on those languages that best reflect the ideological quality and personality characteristics of characters.

(4) Language description should pay attention to occasions.

Situation is an external factor that affects the language expression of characters. The same sentence can be said on some occasions, but not on others. For example, if you talk about the harm of a disease, you can't be in front of people who are suffering from it. For example, jokes also depend on the occasion. Some serious occasions, such as memorial service, can't tell jokes. We should take this into full consideration when describing languages.

(5) When describing the characters' language, it can be matched with expression description, psychological description and action description, thus making the characters more vivid and vivid and appealing.