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Cao Xueqin and A Dream of Red Mansions

For the first time, Zhen Yinshi dreamily learned about channeling and became pregnant with a beautiful family.

After Mrs Jia's second death, Leng Zixing gave a speech in Yangzhou City.

For the third time, Jinling resumed Lin Daiyu's adoption home in Guo Rong, Jia Yucun.

For the fourth time, the unlucky woman was partial to Lang Hulu's misfortune.

The fifth time I dreamed of playing a dream of red mansions, setting new scenes and spreading illusions.

The sixth time Jia Baoyu tried for the first time, Granny Liu entered Guo Rongfu.

The seventh time I sent back the palace flowers, Zhou Rui sighed and won in a row, talking about Qin Zhong's knot with Baoyu.

The eighth time Xue Baochai fell ill, pear fragrance court Jia Baoyu got drunk and stayed with Jiang.

The ninth time, romantic friends entered the school, and they were suspected to be urchins playing school.

The tenth time, the gold widow was greedy for power and humiliated. Zhang Taiyan's View of Pathogenic Poverty

Eleventh birthday celebration, Ningfu family banquet, Xifeng Jia Rui lewd.

The twelfth time, Wang Xifeng set up a lovesickness bureau, and Jia Tianxiang looked at the moon.

Back to the thirteenth Qin Keqing dead dragon commandant Wang Xifeng associated with Ningguo mansion.

I returned to Lin Ruhai for the 14th time to donate Yangzhou City and Jia Baoyu Road to visit the King of Beijing.

Back to the fifteenth time, Wang Xifeng stood in the Iron Threshold Temple and Qin Dequ Steamed Bread Temple.

The sixteenth time, I chose Fengzao Palace, Qin and the road to death.

17 and 18 returned to the Grand View Garden, and I tried my best to answer questions about Fu's return to the province for the Lantern Festival.

Chapter 19 is dedicated to good night.

Back to the twentieth time, Wang Xifeng was right to be jealous of Lin Daiyu's rhetoric and tease her charming voice.

The 21st time, Chen Jiaoxian attacked people and begged Baoyu Qiao Pinger to save Jia Lian.

The 22nd time I listened to Qu Wenbao and Wu Yu Zen machine guessing riddles and Jia Zheng's sad prediction.

The Twenty-third Story of the West Chamber tells the story of Peony Pavilion.

Go back to No.24 drunken King Kong, light wealth, chivalrous, silly daughter, and leave Palma for lovesickness.

Back to the 25th time, Uncle Yan and his sister-in-law met five ghosts, psychic jade, blind encounter and double truth.

Back to the 26 th Bee Waist Bridge, we set up Xiaoxiang Pavilion to talk about honey.

Back to Didi Cuiting on the 27th, Yang Fei's play, butterflies are buried in the incense burial, swallows are crying and red with tears.

In the 28th time, Jiang Yu's affection was given to Qian Xiang, Luo Xuechai, Shame Cage and Musk Deer String.

Back to the twenty-ninth time, I will enjoy the happiness of others and pray for infatuated blessings.

Back to the thirtieth time, Baochai borrowed a fan machine to knock on the old official row and went crazy out of the house.

Tearing the fan for the thirty-first time made my daughter laugh out a white-headed binary star because of Kirin.

I told you the thirty-second time that I was fascinated and Baoyu was ashamed to death.

The thirty-third time, the hands and feet were eyeing up and the lips were corrupt.

The thirty-fourth time I fell in love, I advised my brother because of my sister's mistake.

In the thirty-fifth time, Bai Yuchun tasted lotus leaf soup, and Huang Qiao tied plum blossoms.

Yuanyang dreams of 36 embroideries, indicating that Xuan knows each other and understands pear fragrance court.

Back to the 37th Autumn Frost Zhai, I occasionally got the topic of "Flower Night Chrysanthemum" in Haitang Society.

Chapter 38 Lin Xiaoxiang's Picking Chrysanthemums under the East Hedgehog, Wu's Satire and Crab Singing.

Back to the village, grandma is talking nonsense, and my brother is biased towards it.

Back to the 40th Shi Taijun's two banquets and Grand View Garden, and Jin Yuanyang's three dental declarations.

The forty-first time, tea was in Cui 'an Temple, plum blossoms were snowing, and Hongyi courtyard robbed the mother locust.

Forty-two back to the Blue Army's memory of addiction Xiaoxiang Ziya's banter

Back to the 43rd time for leisure and enjoyment, I can't spend my birthday with gold, but I can't feel it for the time being.

The forty-fourth time, something unexpected happened. Xifeng poured vinegar and was overjoyed. Pinger wears makeup.

Chapter 45 Mutual analysis of gold The stormy words of gold

Chapter 46 Embarrassment is inevitable when people are embarrassed.

Forty-seventh time, when I was flirting with the overlord, my husband was afraid of going abroad.

Chapter 48 promiscuity, misunderstanding, entertainment, and poetry.

Back to the forty-ninth glass world, snow, red plum, pink and fragrant baby cut the fishy smell.

The 50th Huilian Improvised Poem "Warm" and Created "Spring Lantern Riddle"

Back to the fifty-first Xue Xiaomei's "Nostalgia for New Poetry", Hu Yongyi misused tiger and wolf medicine.

Back to the fifty-second time, Qiao Pinger's beard bracelet that loves to cover shrimp and brave Qingwen's illness make up the sparrow's golden hair

Fifty-third back to Ningguo Mansion, New Year's Eve Sacrifice to Ancestral Temple, Guo Rongfu, Lantern Festival, Banquet.

In the fifty-fourth time, Shi Taijun broke the old-fashioned colorful clothes of Wang Xifeng's play.

Fifty-fifth time insulting daughter, fooling concubine, fighting for leisure time, deceiving young master, hiding danger.

Fifty-sixth back to Min Tanchun to promote the benefits and eliminate the disadvantages of accommodation, Baochai was considerate from an early age.

Fifty-seventh back to Zi Juan's sweet talk. Yuci loves to comfort her during menstruation.

Back to the 58th apricot Yin false phoenix cry empty Huang Qianping true feelings slap silly reason.

The fifty-ninth time Liu Chenying was called to fly.

Back to the sixtieth session, jasmine powder replaced rose nitrate rose dew to attract poria cream.

The sixty-first time, Baoyu hid the stolen goods and sentenced him to equal rights.

Back to the sixty-second, Han Xiangyun drunk sleep, peony, Xiangling love pomegranate skirt.

Back to the sixty-third time, Shouyihong Fang Qun gave a banquet and died. Then she died alone.

Sixty-fourth time, a sad topic of Mrs. Jing, five beautiful songs, the love of the prodigal son, Kowloon Pei

Back to the sixty-fifth time, Gao was a hen-pecked wife, stole a concubine, ran away from a prostitute and chose a husband.

Sixty-sixth, I feel ashamed to return to the cold Jiro of hell, and I am cold into an empty net.

Back to my hometown, Miss Qing's hometown, I heard that my child Xifeng was plotting.

Back to the sixty-eighth bitter especially niang makes people grand view garden sour Xifeng makes ningguo mansion.

Back to the sixty-ninth time, I took the little one and killed him with a sword. I felt that the time limit was to swallow gold and die.

The seventieth time, Lin Daiyu rebuilt the history of the Peach Blossom Society, and Xiangyun accidentally filled in catkins.

The seventy-first time, people who have bad feelings have bad feelings, and Yuanyang women have no intention of meeting Yuanyang.

Seventy-two times, Wang Xifeng said that she was ill and rich, and she got married according to the situation.

The seventy-third time, the silly girl took the embroidered spring bag by mistake, and the timid lady didn't ask tired Jinfeng.

The seventy-fourth time, try to check the Grand View Garden and put an end to Ningguo House.

The seventy-fifth night banquet, sad sound to give the Mid-Autumn Festival new words.

Back to the seventy-sixth, the flute in the convex pavilion felt sad and lonely, and the poem in the concave crystal pavilion felt sad and lonely.

Back to the seventy-seventh time, Joe's servant girl was wronged and romantic, and the heroine returned to Shuiyue.

Back to the seventy-eighth, the old bachelor made up the word "lotus"

Back in the 1970s (including the 1980s), Xue regretted marrying Hedong Lion and marrying Zhongshan Wolf by mistake.

Back to the eighty-first, Zhan Wangxiang, Simei, went fishing and swimming, took strict words, and went to the school twice.

Lesson 82 Old pedant police stubborn illness Xiaoxiang crazy soul frightened nightmare

On the eighty-third trip back to the provincial capital, Princess Jia fell ill and swallowed her maiden Xue Baochai.

The eighty-fourth text Baoyu began to propose marriage and explore the wind. Jia Huan made enemies again.

In the eighty-fifth time, Jia became a doctor, and Xue returned from exile.

Back to the eighty-sixth, the bribed old official reversed his conviction privately and sent a book "Xieqin" to Mrs. Leisure.

Back to the eighty-seventh time, I felt Qiu deeply caressing Qin and feeling sad about the past. I meditated, and I was possessed.

Back to the eighty-eighth Boting Huan Baoyu praised the orphan's family law, and Jia Zhen whipped the servant.

Back to the eighty-ninth, the broken thing wrote lyrics in the childe, and the snake shadow cup bowed.

For the ninetieth time, the poor girl who lost her cotton-padded coat was afraid to send fruit. Xiao Lang was surprised.

In the ninety-first time, the prostitute Baochan designed a puzzle, and Baoyu talked about Zen in vain.

Comment on the 92nd episode of Female Biography: Qiaojie Mu Xianliang and Jia Muzhu get together.

In the ninety-third time, Zhen servant took refuge in Jiajiamen Shuiyue Temple and overturned the romantic case.

The Ninety-four Banquet of Begonia and the Flower-Watching Demon by Grandmother Jia lost Baoyu's psychic knowledge of strange disasters.

The ninety-fifth time, because the fake princess died, Baoyu was really crazy.

For the ninety-sixth time, I kept the news. Xifeng set up a plot to vent her mystery.

Back to the ninety-seventh, Lin Daiyu burned the manuscript and broke her infatuation. Xue Baochai became a gift.

In the ninety-eighth time, the soul of bitter crimson pearl left the land of acacia with tears that hated heaven and disease.

Ninety-nine times, the slave guarding Guan Zhen made an exception and read the government newspaper Laojiu at his own risk.

For the first time, I ruined a good thing and married Xiangling, deeply hating the sadness of marrying Baoyu.

For the first time in 10 1 Daguan Garden, the moonlit night in the temple was amazing.

In A.D. 102, Ningguo House suffered from the disease of flesh and blood, and the Grand View Garden was flooded to drive away evil spirits.

/kloc-for the first time in 0/03, Jingui set herself on fire, and Chanyu Village was empty.

/kloc-for the first time in 0/04, drunken king kong loach gave birth to a big wave idiot, and I was in pain.

Back to 105, the Royal Guards raided Ningguo House, making the emissary impeach Pingzhou.

Back to the one hundred and sixth time, Wang Xifeng was ashamed of the disaster, and Jia Taijun prayed to heaven to eliminate the disaster.

107, retired official Jia Mu performed well for the first time.

/kloc-for the first time in 0/08, I laughed so hard that I celebrated my birth and death. I lingered in Xiaoxiang and heard ghosts crying.

Back to 109, the soul of Houfang, Wuer, accepted the wrong love, paid the bad debt, and welcomed her daughter Zhenyuan back.

Back in 1 10 years ago, Shi Taijun's birthday ended in Wang Fengjie's efforts to lose people's hearts.

The first time was11/year. Yuanyang was martyred, and the dog was too weak to bully the sky and recruit thieves.

The first time I lived a wonderful life, Zhao robbed Kan Qiu's concubine to death as a ghost Cao.

For the 113th time, please ask Feng to go to the village to release her old feelings and feelings.

Returning to Wang Xifeng's fantasy and Jinling, Zhen Xuan's grace belongs to Yu Que.

Before 1 15, I was confused and selfish, and I was afraid of spring, vector, element, ambition and syndrome.

Back to 1 16 years ago, I got psychic fantasies, realized fairy tales, and sent my kindness to my hometown.

The first seven anti-Chi Mei double protection jade happy party evil children alone.

Back to 1 18, I was a little skeptical about my uncle and brother bullying women, scary riddles, and wives' advice to idiots.

As early as 1 19 years ago, Zhong Xiang's Kui Baoyu was destined for Huang Mu, Enjia and Yan Shize.

Back to Zhenguan, the first and twentieth chapters detailed Jia Yucun's feeling of being too empty in A Dream of Red Mansions.

Appendix:

1. The death of Lin Daiyu written by Cao Xueqin

2. Cao Xueqin did something more than 79 times?

3. It should be Cao Xueqin's father Cao Fu.

4. Interpret the article "Pressing Books" in Fat Review.

5. The gap between the sequel to A Dream of Red Mansions and the original.

Table of Four Family Relationships in A Dream of Red Mansions

A Dream of Red Mansions: Slave Table of Rongning Mansion