Five killers of complex sentence writing;

1. Use attributive clauses to express functions: a simple sentence with+after a noun in the main sentence can make+express functions (it is best not to use pronouns in the subject of simple sentences, because pronouns here need to use the objective case, and it is safer if nouns such as employing people are not mastered well).

I have many books that can make people like English. I have many books that can make people like English. )

2. express facts with subject clauses: very clear+simple sentences that express facts.

Obviously, books are very important. Obviously, books are very important. )

3. Use non-predicate structure to express advantages: something that is considered important,+a simple sentence that expresses the advantages of things (the subject of this simple sentence can't be a person, it must be something with advantages).

For example, what is considered important, books will help us in school. )

4. Express the result with flip structure: Only in this way can+ is a simple sentence, representing the result caused by the previous sentence.

Only in this way can people learn different things. Only in this way can people learn different things. )

5. Use the conditional adverbial clause of If to express the prospect: the simple sentence of If+ means the simple sentence of 1 and then+2 (if structure needs to adopt the principle of "master and slave come now", it doesn't matter if you don't understand this principle, just remember that the simple sentence 1 uses the simple present tense and the simple sentence 2 uses the simple future tense).

If we read books, we will learn different things. If we read books, we can learn different things. )

When you master these five weapons, you will be invincible. Faced with any composition topic, you can cut melons and vegetables and make them bow down. Of course, if you only write these five complicated sentences, the number of words is still not enough. The composition requirement of most provinces and cities is about 100 words. Then you should mix some simple sentences in your composition. Don't underestimate simple sentences, sometimes simple sentences are more powerful. For example, Julius Caesar, who conquered the world, has a famous saying: Winnie the Pooh, Vidy and Vici. Caesar is a Roman and speaks Latin, which translates into English: I came, I saw, I conquered. ) Caesar is a pure man, and simple sentences are so domineering!

Moreover, the ratio of complex sentences to simple sentences is better quantified and solidified, and it is easier to implement in writing. My suggestion is five long and four short: long, short, long and short. That is, five long sentences (compound sentences) and four short sentences (simple sentences) are combined alternately to form a fixed order, which is comfortable to look at and can meet the word requirement (nine sentences are basically between 90- 100 words, even in abnormal provinces where the word requirement is 150 words, students can add several long and short sentences of the same type by themselves).

In addition, the importance of cohesive words is also mentioned in the college entrance examination English composition scoring standard. Cohesive words show clear logical relations between sentences, making the composition more seamless. The fourth brother will teach you three basic cohesive words, which are very simple: there (therefore), ideas (however) and how (but), which respectively represent the logical relationship between the result, progression and turning point of this sentence and the previous sentence, and must be used at the beginning of the sentence with a comma in the middle. I like books. I often buy books there. Or I like books. Besides, I often give my books to my friends. Or I like reading. I don't have time anyway.

Finally, I learned. Let's embark on a journey with the five killers. Let's pick an opponent at random. Therefore, the fourth brother did not deliberately choose the topic of the composition. Enter the keyword "20 13 college entrance examination English composition" randomly in Baidu, and the first search result is an article "20 13 provincial and municipal college entrance examination English composition zhenti and model essay" in Baidu library. The first question is 20 13 Shanghai College Entrance Examination English composition, which is as follows:

A famous exhibition of paintings will be held in Shanghai Museum. Public opinions are now sought on the exhibition location (museum or community library). Suppose you are Wang Min, write a letter to Shanghai Museum and express your thoughts. Your letter must meet the following requirements: 1. Briefly describe the purpose of your letter and the place you choose; 2. Explain your reasons (compare the convenience and professionalism of the two places)

Don't rush to write a composition, just sketch it out first. I'm playing learning ink now, and my vocabulary is just at the junior high school level, which is still limited. So I will say "library" instead of "museum", so even if I think the art exhibition is more "tall" in the museum, I have to deceive myself with tears: I might as well hold an art exhibition in the library run by the street. What is more tragic is that the exhibition won't say anything, so I will use "activities" in general instead. Finally, everything we say is good as long as it is good, and bad as long as it is bad. This composition was so unconsciously KO by me. Do children's shoes think it's ok to write this composition?

Ok, go to school to be a model essay! (The green part is the five killers, the blue part is the heart of a simple sentence, the yellow part is the prepositional phrase often attached to the heart of the sentence, and the pink part is the cohesive word) (Remember the format of the beginning and end of Fan Zhong's letters, which can be applied to all letters in the future)

Dear Mr. or Ms. (If you know the name of the recipient, use a specific name instead of Mr. or Ms.),

Obviously, many people like the activities in Shanghai. I will talk about my ideas in two parts.

If you carry out activities in the library, many people will like this idea. The library is near our home. Only in this way can you have a lot of people to participate in the activities. Activities in the library will be good. Besides, the library is a good place where people can enjoy reading. Therefore, people will like to draw in the library.

If it is considered important, this activity will be very popular in the future.

Yours,

Wang Min (whatever the composition gives you)

A seemingly difficult composition was thus killed by us! How's it going? Is there anything as domineering as I came (to the "College Entrance English" WeChat platform), I saw (the article "Wonderful Pen and Flowers" by Brother Four) and I conquered (College Entrance English Composition)?

Point English composition also has a scoring point: advanced vocabulary. Because this article is elaborated from the perspective of the learning bubble with weak vocabulary, the words used are relatively low, but if you are lucky, you may be the first in the exam. In the future, Brother Four will also publish articles on how to use advanced vocabulary. Please pay attention, to be continued.