First of all, a little advice, unify the shape of your article. Let's not talk about Dinning for the time being, but simplify it for the time being. It's confusing. If you keep a diary, use short form. If it is more formal, it is better to use a respectful style, and some places will change. For example, how about "どぅげば"? This too casual statement is not very desirable.

Let's talk about grammar. Agree to add a number 10+0 upstairs. Then, "everyone is happy and everything comes true." What does this sentence mean? The whole country rejoiced? Use a phrase you have never heard of "I like it in junior high school". The machine turned it over ... sorry. わたし12418Exception ではなぃ. "Private もそのでした" is more like Japanese. The phrase "Mid-Autumn Festival this National Day" is meaningless. It is right to say "Mid-Autumn Festival on National Day this year". "そんなぃのぅちに" was changed to "こんなぃ". "からぶ "