Heroes ロビンのキャラクターをもっとぃてし. People save lives. People don't think about it. ぁまりにストーーにがってぃるためつキ きのスタンスではぁる.

I hope I can better describe and shape Robin as a hero. For example, his motivation to save people and his advantages, people's views on him and so on. I feel that the author pays too much attention to the unfolding of the story and ignores these descriptions. I hope the author will think more about the importance of role-shaping, which is the basis for entering youth magazines.

■ Tazo Nakamura (Deputy Editor-in-Chief of the 4th Editorial Department of Jiyingshe); GRANDJUMPPREMIUM)

まだコマりのせなぃはぁるががだけはななながななな 1

The hero のキメゴマなどそれなりに is from でてぃるののに.

28 ...

The expression of split mirror is still a little weak, but it is ok to read reasoning comics (the kind of juvenile chronicles)

Because the key images of the protagonist are properly expressed, a good arrangement can still make something look like it.

28 years old ...

■ Lin Shiping (Senior Editor, JUMP SQ, Jiyingshe)

⾑がでがでがてますががでが,

ルービックキューブにきました. What are the "general" departments in China?

All words and phrases expand faster than words and phrases.

Girls, dreams, what are dreams? にかりにくぃです.

デートのぃとぃさせたぃのでぁればそば.

また, のがすぎるまましてぃるのもが.

What happened? What is the truth of the incident? とにさせるよぅ, the first half of the work is necessary.

Exploration story, protagonist, event, and event.

The story になパーツ (ぁる means ルール) がぁりますし〭.

The painting is very careful, which makes people feel good, but I am still quite surprised by the "Rubik's Cube Department". Is this an ordinary club activity in China?

Generally speaking, the story starts a little too early, which is quite worrying.

Does the invitation of the red-haired girl feel like a dream? It is not easy to understand from the context.

If you want readers to mistake this for an invitation to a date, you should arrange the dialogue and interaction according to that situation.

In addition, it is also interesting that the story continues when the details of the incident are still mysterious.

In order to enable readers to "what is the truth of this incident?" In order to arouse interest, the first half needs more thinking.

As a detective story, why the protagonist can reason and what kind of sadness is hidden behind the incident are all necessary parts (or rules) of the story. Please study the reasoning work more carefully before challenging the creation of the next work.

■ Shan Fanmei (in the copyright department of Jiyingshe; Former "Nippon" editor)

はシャープでかっこぃぃだけどのキャャ.

Solve puzzles, work hard, pursue.

かっこよくせことはすごくなのでそで.

The lines are tough and handsome. But unfortunately, the protagonist's character didn't perform well when he first appeared.

It took a lot of time to solve the puzzle, but the character who pursues this is not flesh and blood. From the reader's point of view, it always seems to be negligible.

The handsome place is very good, so it is good for readers to feel more real.

■ Three rounds of Hongkang (edited by Super Dush, light novel library of Jiyingshe)

ストーリーにのぃかなぃぃぃ. Prerequisite :がわかり𞏷

ルービックキューブってそんなにはやってるの?

There are many unreasonable places in the story. The preconditions are difficult to understand, and it is difficult to get to the point.

Is the Rubik's Cube really so popular?

■ Yuji Sawano (Margaret, Editor-in-Chief, Ying Ji Institution)

ドラマチックに See せよぅとがんばってし .. モノってなんとなく; したよぅながしね.

Although the work itself really wants to express a kind of drama, and it has been performed very hard, the tactics are still too weak. Motivation and events are relatively weak. Although the reasoning process will vaguely make people feel that it can be established, first of all, it is important to consider whether the reader is interested in such an event and whether it can describe the person who caused it well.

■ Gao Qiao Zheng Min (Deputy Editor-in-Chief of Comics Living, Media Factory)

センスはぁりそぅだが, やはり.⾑をぅまくしてほしぃ.

The picture still feels, but it's still a little rough. I hope I can draw it more exquisitely.

■ Wanmuzhuang (Deputy Editor-in-Chief of Cartoon Board of Media Factory)

〝のさののさがのひきつけきらなぃ.もっとシンプルなやりでをげさにせな.

The style of painting is not stable enough, and the story is far-fetched, which can't attract readers' interest in reading. If we can show the grand scene of reasoning in a more concise way, it should attract readers to see the end.

the china review or notes and queries on the far east

■ Fan Wannan (Chairman of Taiwan Province Dongli Publishing House Co., Ltd.)

The style of this work belongs to orthodox Japanese style, which is highly accepted by young male readers. The role modeling is amazing, the overall split mirror is smooth, and the performance tension is good. In the plot part, the author is too wishful thinking, and the setting that the protagonist gives up the priesthood and becomes a detective is far-fetched. He doesn't express his ideas directly and simply in his works, and he can't feel the role. In the part of reasoning and solving puzzles, the key images are not emphasized. It is a pity that readers are trapped in a simple audience and cannot integrate into reasoning.

■ Chris Huang (Chairman of International Multimedia Co., Ltd.)

The style of painting has the shadow of others, the plot is dull, and the motive for committing crimes is slightly weak.

■ Zhu Weiguo (General Manager of Digital Media Company of Zhejiang Publishing Group)

The plot develops clearly, the events are analyzed by logical thinking, and the "ghost" phenomenon is solved by science, so that the suspense is uncovered layer by layer. The prescribed scene setting of "Chamber of Secrets" is relatively routine. If the rhythm of the split mirror can be stronger, the combination of the picture and the plot development will be better.

■ Le Jian (Vice President of Shanghai People's Fine Arts Publishing House)

The story is supernatural, rational and has a good atmosphere.