You are about to graduate from primary school and leave school. Please leave your best wishes for your alma mater and suggestions for your mother's work. Take a walk around the school to see what is not satisfactory; Recalling the school life in recent years, looking for things that school leaders and teachers did not think of or did not do well; You can also talk to other classmates and find out their views on school work. Choose one or two important things, think about how to solve them, and write a letter to the headmaster or teacher of the school, in which suggestions for improvement can be put forward. Write your thoughts clearly and express your true feelings.

The finishing touch of writing

This exercise is to let us put forward our own suggestions to the headmaster or teacher of our alma mater by writing letters, so that our alma mater can improve its work, equipment and facilities, and better teach and educate people. This is indeed a very realistic content for students. How can I write this exercise well?

First, the content should be specific and the reasons should be sufficient.

Making suggestions is to put forward your own views and opinions on things and ask the relevant departments or leaders and teachers of the school to adopt them in order to change those unsatisfactory situations. Good suggestions should not only be convincing and persuasive, but also be specific to what they want leaders or teachers to improve and perfect, so that they can be adopted. To this end, an investigation must be conducted. You can go to various departments, grades, function rooms and various activity places of the school, have a look and listen, see what is unsatisfactory and what is not done well, get to know the views of students or parents on the status quo, and listen to what good ideas, good ideas and good methods you have. Only through investigation and interview can we find out the problems existing in the campus environment, teaching facilities, teachers' teaching methods, school activities, the school's evaluation of classmates and the future development of the school, and put forward our own suggestions. Second, there must be analysis. When you collect what you have seen and heard, you should think about it: what problems have I found or heard from everyone? How to solve these problems? What good idea do I have? Who to advise? After some analysis, you will list several problems and solutions, and consider who to propose them to. This will make it clear to write a proposal.

Second, be sincere and speak appropriately.

I am the small master of the school, and the rise and fall of the school is related to me. Giving advice to your alma mater is like chatting with your mother. When you confide in your heart, it is irrelevant to seek truth from facts-to make suggestions based on specific problems, actual needs and possible conditions, rather than imagining them out of thin air. Only in this way can you improve your working methods, carry out useful activities, improve teaching facilities and optimize the campus environment. Second, sincerity-be grateful to your alma mater and teachers, be sincere, and don't make unreasonable demands, otherwise it won't help; Third, speak appropriately-when making suggestions, pay attention to your tone of voice, be calm, be nice to proper limit, and don't use excessive words or barbed articles. This is the attitude that the protagonist should have.

Third, the format should be correct and the handwriting should be neat.

This exercise requires us to write to the school leaders or teachers and give suggestions. We are familiar with the format of this letter. Here is mainly about the writing of the proposal. Proposal is a commonly used practical article for individuals or groups to reflect the situation to the relevant leaders or departments on the problems existing in all aspects of social life and put forward their own constructive opinions. Generally, it is divided into five parts: title, title, text, signature and date, and its format is not much different from that of ordinary letters.

In addition, the writing style should be correct, neat and standardized, and it should not be a dragon and phoenix dance, which not only reflects the author's knowledge and cultivation, but also includes respect for readers.

Treasure 1

Propose to my alma mater

Dear principal:

Hello!

I stayed in primary school for six years. As a graduating student, I want to say from the bottom of my heart: "Thank you, my alma mater!" " "Out of my love for my alma mater and in order to make the school more popular with students and parents, I want to give some useful' suggestions' to the school, which can also be regarded as a gift to my alma mater.

I hope the school can reopen the library. You must know better than we do that books are the source of all wisdom. With books, students have an inexhaustible treasure house of knowledge. With the library, we can get more spiritual wealth. At the same time, long-term silent reading can make our reading speed and ability improve rapidly, and our desire to learn knowledge rises rapidly.

The year before last, the library of our school was changed into a multi-function hall for some reason, and books were moved into a small house. Since then, it has never opened its doors to us. Now, I suggest reopening it. In order not to embarrass the headmaster, I specially designed a plan.

First, clean the small house, put some big tables and benches in it, and turn it into a new small library.

Secondly, we can make some "school library membership cards" specially, so that students who like reading can apply for certificates at the logistics office. A membership card can be used for one semester. You can borrow books from the library with this card. Students should be allowed to get their cards before the museum opens. At the same time, buy more books that students like. Then change some "self-study classes" into "reading classes", or use the trusteeship classes every Monday, Tuesday, Thursday and Friday to turn one of them into a reading class. In this way, students have enough reading time.

Thirdly, arrange a teacher in the library to borrow and return books, maintain indoor order and ensure students to read better. Students who do not apply for a certificate can borrow books and read in the classroom under the leadership of teachers or class cadres.

The above is my little plan, and I hope the headmaster will adopt it when the school economy allows.

I am here to convey

Salute!

Student Liang Pei

March 20(th), 2007

Alibaba treasure:

Out of the thirst for spiritual wealth and love for his alma mater, the young author put forward his own suggestions in the form of letters. The proposal is not only substantial in content and clear in purpose, but also shows the benefits of realizing the "proposal". More importantly, the author gave a concrete and clear description of the feasibility of his proposal. In addition, the methods of implementing the suggestions are listed in detail, which meets the requirements of this exercise.

Treasure 2

My advice

Dear school leaders:

Hello! I am a student in Class Kloc-0, Grade 6. I have lived on campus for almost six years, and I really can't bear to leave my alma mater. Before I leave school, I have a few suggestions to tell you. I hope you can take my advice.

The school where we studied turned out to be a children's school run by a factory, and the school building was very shabby. The two basketball stands on the playground are also rusted. The teaching building is very old, only the three-story building has poor light; There are only four brick ping-pong tables next to the teaching building, which can't meet the needs of students' activities. It's great now. The newly-built gate is both beautiful and spectacular. The teaching building has put on "new clothes"-the roof has been repaired again, with a layer of red and orange tiles, which looks like a new house. In the building, the aisles, classrooms and offices on the third and fourth floors are all decorated with beige floor tiles, and the walls are also pasted with wall tiles about 1 m high. We are very happy to study in such an environment. The school has a new look, and the students love their school more.

Our school is still in transition, but it is not ideal enough. I would like to give the following suggestions to school leaders:

The playground hasn't been repaired yet, so it should be repaired quickly. The school playground is too small. It is better to requisition some land around the school, expand the playground and build a plastic football field.

● The basketball court in front of the teaching building should also be plastic, which is both beautiful and convenient for students' activities.

Within the fence, we can also plant many kinds of flowers and trees to make our campus more beautiful, like a big garden.

There used to be many snack bars near the school gate. Many students like to buy snacks. After eating, they throw away the peels and food bags, which not only affects the environmental sanitation of the school, but also affects the health of the students, because the food in those small food stores is not very hygienic. I hope the relevant departments will tear down those food stalls. The school brigade should also strengthen students' habit education of loving cleanliness and hygiene, and don't eat snacks indiscriminately.

● Some students bring snacks to school and throw them on the ground as long as they stay away from the trash can, which is very uncivilized. It is suggested to set up more smaller trash cans to facilitate students to throw dirty things. But it's best not to let students bring snacks to school.

The above five suggestions, I wonder if they are right, are for the reference of school leaders only.

I am here to convey

Salute!

Wei Yuzhe

April 2007

Alibaba treasure:

The exercise is correct in form, substantial in content and fluent in language, which is a good proposal. The little author loves his alma mater, and through the comparison of the school environment in the past and present, he hopes that his alma mater will be more beautiful, and puts forward the suggestion of beautifying the campus with all kinds of flowers and trees; In view of the present situation of many small food stalls around the school, this paper puts forward some suggestions to ban these stalls. I hope that students will not eat snacks and litter, and form a good habit of paying attention to hygiene and environmental protection; He also combined with the actual situation of small school activity venues, put forward the proposal of requisition of surrounding land, expansion of playground and construction of football field. In a word, the author's suggestions will promote the future development of his alma mater.

Treasure 3

My wishes and suggestions to my alma mater

Dear headmaster and teacher,

I am Liu Zhihong, a fresh graduate of our school. When I am about to leave my alma mater, a feeling of parting makes me have a thousand words to say to you.

Six years ago, when I entered this school, I was still an innocent child. Now, I have grown into a charming teenager with a red scarf on my chest. With your care and cultivation, I spent the most beautiful and unforgettable childhood here, which made my body and mind develop in an all-round way. All this is inseparable from the fertile soil of my alma mater and the careful cultivation of your hard-working gardeners. I believe your efforts for me will not be in vain. I will use my actions to realize my promise to you today!

On the eve of parting, I summed up a thousand words into a simple but most sincere sentence and said, "Thank you, alma mater, thank you, teacher!" " "

I love my alma mater very much, because it is the cradle of cultivating talents. I wish my alma mater better and better, and the flowers will bloom more and more brightly! However, while expressing my deep love, I also want to give some suggestions on the future development of my alma mater and do my bit for my classmates.

Generally speaking, our alma mater is in the right direction and its achievements are obvious to all. Moral, intellectual and physical development in an all-round way. My alma mater has been among the best in similar schools in the whole region and has been well received. As her student, I am very proud. But I won't go into details today. I want to talk more about some shortcomings in the United States.

Let me talk about intellectual education first. At ordinary times, the biggest voice of students is that the homework load is too heavy and they are surrounded by problems all day. Endless homework deprives us of the right to "play" and makes us less childlike and naive. Undoubtedly, this is detrimental to the physical and mental development of children who are learning knowledge. On the one hand, it seems that the school has not paid enough attention to it. I hope the school can make some effective adjustments and powerful improvements as soon as possible in reducing the burden of students' schoolwork.

Secondly, the problem of being a teacher. Most teachers do well, but some teachers are not negligent in some aspects. Individual teachers' school dress does not match their teacher status; When individual teachers raise the national flag, they whisper to others and walk around in the playground. Teachers usually emphasize the sanctity of raising the national flag, so why not set an example? I hope teachers will be more conscious, and schools should also pay attention to the problem of "teaching by example is more important than teaching by words".

Finally, talk about the issue of caring about collective honor. There is still a gap in the understanding of a few students. This semester, some students neglected social morality outside school, which had a bad influence on the image of the school. For example, a middle-grade female classmate was caught by the manager picking flowers in the garden of the park; Several senior gay men were fined for playing football on the lawn of the park, which is typical. The school did not seize this signboard to educate students and turn bad things into good things, so similar phenomena still happen from time to time. I hope the school can strengthen this education, make use of the situation to guide students to know how to care for the honor of the school and consciously abide by social morality.

If there are no problems with the above three suggestions, I hope they can be adopted.

Liu Zhihong, a student in Class 6 (3).

April 25(th), 2007

Alibaba treasure:

This composition is first of all the gratitude of the young author, the bottom-breaking promise, sincere thanks and the wishes of the students, and then puts forward concrete and sincere suggestions: reducing the burden on the students, hoping that teachers can realize that setting an example is more important than teaching by example, and hoping that the students cherish the collective honor. This is a good proposal, which expresses the sincere feelings of young authors and puts forward reasonable suggestions. Appropriate language, in line with identity.

Material basket

The general format of the proposal is similar to the general format, mainly including the following points:

△ Title-written in the middle of the first line, which can be titled "Proposal" or another novel and vivid topic according to the specific content of the proposal.

△ Address-Write it at the top of the second line. Who is your suggestion addressed to? Write down the title and add a colon after the title to indicate that you have something to say.

△ Text-Write two spaces at the beginning of the next line of the address. The text is generally divided into three parts: first, write clearly the problems found, then explain the causes of the problems, and finally put forward the methods and suggestions to solve the problems.

△ Signature-written on the lower right of the text, which can be the name of an individual or the name of a group.

△ Date —— Write down the specific time when the proposal was made under the signature.

suggestion

School Young Pioneers Brigade Department:

March 5th is the anniversary of President Mao Zedong's inscription "Learn from Comrade Lei Feng". In order to carry forward the spirit of Lei Feng, help others and educate ourselves in the activities, we suggest that the brigade department carry out "offering love" activities.

First, learn to do housework. At home, we have to cook, wash dishes and clean the room. Try to be a good helper for your parents.

Second, on-site service. Each group determines the clients from the elderly, the weak, the sick and the disabled who live nearby, and makes regular visits to do some good things within their power.

Third, take care of public property. We should consciously keep our classrooms and campuses clean and take good care of all school facilities.

Fourth, donate books. Call on all the team members to donate the meaningful books they have read and give them to the partners who are studying in "Hope Primary School".

Is the above suggestion feasible? Please learn to travel!

Young pioneers, let's take Uncle Lei Feng as an example and offer our sincere love, so that "we live to make others live better."

All Young Pioneers in Class 2, Grade 6