This week, we just finished the final exam. I thought I did well, but when I handed out my report card a few days ago, I was completely shocked. My English is only 3 points (3 points means I only got more than 70 points). This achievement is really shameful. Is it my achievement? You did badly in the exam. I can't just get that many points. How did I do so badly in the exam? I didn't study hard? I ask myself again and again in my mind. The more I think about it, the angrier I get, and I almost cry. Well, after thinking about it, I think it's because I don't work hard enough and do the questions carelessly. Hey, I don't want to. This exam is also a punishment for me!
It sounded the alarm for me and gave me a wake-up call. A failure is nothing, and failure may be a precursor to success. As long as I try to correct my carelessness, I will succeed. Work hard, I want to say goodbye to carelessness! I did badly in this exam. I will study hard next semester, get rid of bad habits and try to get good grades in future exams. Come on!
Teacher's comment: the article first explains the poor performance in the final exam, and then summarizes the reasons. As can be seen from the article, the author is very dissatisfied and annoyed with his achievements this time, so he is determined to get rid of his carelessness. From the structural point of view, it is complete and natural, well-organized, orderly, with clear center and strong expressive force. It is worth noting that the word "de" in "I thought I did well in the exam" and "How did I do a terrible job in the exam" should be changed to "de". The word "de" in the last paragraph is used correctly, as if it was caused by "carelessness" Study hard now, not next semester!
Laughter is a unique expression of people, and the laughter in our class is also very interesting.
Students in the class also love to laugh, but the laughter is different. Gnome male-"laughter came from the supreme Lu in our class. It can be said that wherever he goes, there is laughter. In addition to this kind of smile, Supreme Lu also has a unique smile, "Ahahahaha", which makes his voice much louder. As long as you hear his smile, you can say that 80% of him is laughing at people, and sometimes he will attract everyone to laugh together.
If Lu Zhizun's smile is interesting, then look at Huang's smile again!
Huang's smile is very interesting. When he laughs, his head tilts, his eyes squint, and sometimes his eyes swing down, just like a monkey, and sometimes he laughs "hee hee"; Sometimes it is "hehehe" and sometimes it is "oh hehehe".
All right, let's talk about everyone's jokes. As long as Mr. Shen tells a joke, the laughter in our class will be terrible. Some people giggle and laugh their heads off; Some people's laughter is "oh, oh, oh", and their heads are almost low. Some people "shout" and cover their stomachs, and everyone's laughter is different; But I don't know why I remember it so firmly, but I don't know my smile. This is really weird.
Everyone laughs differently, but I can't forget it. Tell me this is interesting.
Everyone who has met my father says that he is young and handsome. His hair is short, dark and dense, and occasionally a few white hairs appear mischievously, but it doesn't affect his father's handsomeness at all. There are a pair of big eyes under two heavy eyebrows, and staring at them makes me cringe. With a high nose and a slightly raised mouth, you can see at a glance that he is an optimistic person.
Why do you say little dad? Although my father is in his thirties, he still thinks like a child. He often does things that even I feel childish, but he will have a good time. I remember one time, he stayed at home with me and then painted a picture with great interest. He proudly asked me, "Do you think Dad paints well? These are two countries at war. These little people are soldiers. They are at war. " When I saw it, I couldn't help laughing and said to my father, "This is not a military battle. I think it's an ant fight. " Dad listened to my words and laughed with me.
My father is such a childlike person, and I love my little father!
Time flies, everything is changing, and many changes have taken place in Class 4, Grade 4. At the beginning of the new semester this year, we have entered the fourth grade. Our Chinese, math, English and other teachers have all changed, especially the head teacher has changed to our favorite teacher, Mr. Zhang, which is very different from the previous head teacher. Many changes have taken place in our class, among which the most important change is "three more", which three more?
The first "more" is more homework. In the third grade, I usually finish my homework around 7 pm and then read my favorite books. However, in the fourth grade, homework became a lot. Every Chinese lesson should be previewed, and good words and sentences should be extracted in peacetime. There are many math problems every day. What is more frightening is that sometimes I will be punished for copying a wrong question many times. Once, I was fined to copy the title of the math test paper ten times. I often need to do a lot of punishment homework, so I can finish it at almost nine o'clock every day. I'm worried that if you add so much homework to each level, if it's grade six, isn't it, going to the next level, that homework won't be finished until midnight? It's terrible to think about it.
The second "more" is to read more books. In the past, there were very few students in our class who loved reading. It felt like Wu Yinan and us. In grade three, there was a big bookcase in our class. This is the library of our class. But it has hardly been opened yet. Our head teacher, Mr. Zhu. The first rule is that everyone can borrow freely, but it soon became that only students with good grades can borrow. But not long after, the teacher changed it to not let anyone see it, and the library was just a decoration. But because there are several books that are particularly interesting, I really want to read them. Once I secretly took a picture. Teacher Zhu also punished me. However, in the fourth grade, our teacher Zhang encouraged the students to read more books and recommended many books by Cao Wenxuan and Shen. Now almost all the students in our class have read Straw House and Dream of the Wolf King. Teacher Zhang asked us to do excerpts while reading and share stories in class. Now our whole class likes reading extracurricular books, and the following class libraries can borrow them at will. In the third grade, only good students can enjoy the rights. Now each of us can borrow them directly. It's really "in the old society, Wang thanked Tang and flew into the homes of ordinary people."
The third "more" means more joy. Our class has organized many extracurricular activities since the fourth grade. For example, our class has birthday activities for students every month to celebrate their birthdays. We also organized a New Year's Eve party and a tug-of-war competition. I also won the 27th place in winter long-distance running this year. Our class also won the second place in the table tennis competition. We all take an active part in these activities, and our classmates all feel a sense of collective honor. The students feel much friendlier.
Time flies and everything is changing. I hope there will be more and better changes in Class Four and Class Four.
Time flies. It's been half a semester. In order to test our academic achievements in the past six months, our school held a mid-term exam yesterday.
Today, the teacher reported the mid-term exam scores and handed out the papers. My scores are 86, 88 and 89 respectively, and the average score is only 87. The teacher and we carefully analyzed each topic. At this time, I feel that some points in Chinese should not be deducted. For example, the third small question of the second big topic requires us to use several two-part allegorical sayings in a sentence. I only wrote two-part allegorical sayings, useless sentences, and wasted two points. The second question is my concept: reading comprehension has always accounted for a lot of points, and I always deduct seven or eight points from this question, which is the main reason for my loss of points. Let's talk about math! Calculation is the most important and basic mathematics. As long as the calculation is wrong, then the whole topic is wrong. However, I have deducted eight points from my calculation problem, which is an old problem I often make.
I have so many questions, in the doctor's words, "I am very ill." I am determined to correct all my mistakes. First of all, you must listen carefully in class, raise your hand boldly, thoroughly understand the questions you don't understand, do your homework carefully, correctly, quickly and well, prepare and review well, and learn from good students. The results of the senior high school entrance examination are not ideal, which makes me feel sorry for the hard work and sweat of the school teachers and the hopes of my parents at home. I will certainly rise up in disappointment, work hard on the word "diligence" and get good grades in the exam.
Fourth grade final composition article 6 "Come and see! The final exam results are out! " The representative of our class's math class shouted. His voice is so loud and high, like thunder, like waves beating against rocks, and like landslides.
Hearing this, the students gathered around to look at the paper and shouted:
"That's great! I got a hundred points! "
"I finally surpassed the monitor!"
"My mother should reward me again!"
"I can play games again!"
"I got 98 points!"
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I gathered around and gloated, thinking that I must be 100%. I went over and looked at the scores on the test paper. I was dumbfounded, as if my blood had stopped flowing. Even my former classmates with poor grades are a few points higher than me. I flushed with shame. I did badly in the math exam. I frown, like a lock that can't be opened, with drooping eyebrows and dim eyes.
Back in my seat, I looked at the test paper in my hand, with tears in my eyes. Tears fell like broken beads, and my nose sobbed and answered, thinking, "How can I go back and explain to my mother?" I will definitely be beaten by my mother! It's over! "
"Jingle bells" class bell rang, and I sat there with tears in my eyes, staring blankly, sipping my mouth, holding my head in my hands and stamping my feet.
When I got home, I stole a look at my mother through the door, twisted the door carefully and walked in softly. My heart is uneasy, like fifteen buckets of water. My mother seemed to read my mind, touched my head, hugged me and looked at me tenderly. Her mouth opened, showing her white teeth, and said, "Did you fail the exam?" Hearing this, I had to nod my head. My mother took my test paper, looked at it and calmly said to me, "It doesn't matter if you didn't do well this time." The key is to find out the reason and study hard in the future. I will definitely improve my performance next time. " Her voice is so soft, like a lark singing, like a swallow whispering, like a spring tinkling, like a brook gurgling, like waves lapping on the beach.
I walked into the room with a sigh of relief and made up my mind that I must find the reason for the next exam, study hard and perform well.
The final exam is coming today. I got up early and began to review my lessons.
Chinese and math are tested in the morning, and Chinese is reviewed first. I have been reviewing lesson 1 to lesson 32. After reviewing Chinese, I immediately put down my Chinese book and picked up my math book to start reviewing. Ah, I finally finished reviewing and began to eat breakfast. After breakfast, I went to school immediately. I withdrew my warehouse yesterday morning. I just need to find my place. Oh, I see my position. It's in the second vertical column next to the window, in the second row. I found my place. Sit up again. I reviewed all the Chinese textbooks again. Then the invigilator said, "The first one who takes the Chinese exam, hurry to the toilet and start the exam after arriving in the classroom." I immediately went to the toilet and then started the exam. I finished all my homework in about 50 minutes. Then I checked it twice and played there.
I began to collect test papers and handed them over to the teacher at once. I went out to play again. When I come back, I will review my math textbook and then start the exam. I probably have a math class and I finished it in 50 minutes. Then I checked it twice, and then I almost began to collect the papers. I handed them over to the teacher quickly. The exam is over.
I hope my exam results are not bad. Keep trying!
The exciting Christmas and happy New Year's Day have become our wonderful memories. The new year is coming, and with it comes the maddening final exam. We must calm down, calm down and calm down again.
However, the arrival of the final exam is always obvious.
A week ago, my mother asked me in my ear like a repeater, "Do you know how long it will be before the final exam?" If I say, "I know, it's been more than two weeks." Mom will say, "if you don't review, I'll see what you do in the final exam!" " If I say, "I don't know, how long will it take? "My mother's endless answer will be a lot of names of schoolmasters:" Look, DuDu, Xiaoyu, Zhu Xiao, Diana, XXX, XXX have already started reviewing. What are you still doing? "
In the past two days, I received receipts from Mr. He and Ms. Smith, copied the test paper, copied the test paper ... It seems that I will take a big stack of test papers to meet the final exam. I can already imagine that after a week, we will be overwhelmed by the test paper. I think pears are big when I think about them.
Children's shoes, get ready for the baptism of the test paper. You will feel that it is raining ... in order not to fail, you should study hard and treat the final exam well.
You know, review is the most important thing.
Fourth grade final composition 9>；; Ingeniously borrow the materials around you.
Many times, some materials are very suitable for the theme of the composition, but these materials may not be realized by themselves, which requires flexible handling of materials. For example, if I am a teacher, I can start with my own teacher's example, but the protagonist should be myself.
Transfer of textbook materials & gt& gt
Chinese class is the back garden of our writing, and the contents in the textbook are good writing materials, but we should not copy them mechanically, but use them for our own use and flexibly. For example, the story of serving the people in the textbook can be applied to the composition like my ideal.
Application of>& gt social hotspots
News keeps coming, and hot spots keep coming. If we can add relevant social hotspots to our composition, it will make our article novel and interesting. Such as Yushu earthquake, Shanghai World Expo, South Africa World Cup, etc. It can be written in our composition.
& gt& gt Write ordinary things
We should pay attention to the little things and ordinary things that happen around us, and then record them as material for later use. For example, on a rainy day, you and your classmates play football in the rain. Although your clothes are all wet, you still cheer for your victory. You lie on the ground and observe the movement of ants; Grandpa teaches you to make kites; Wait a minute.
& gt& gt Write something that interests you.
We should pay attention to the small things and ordinary things that happen to people around us, and then record what we are interested in as material for later use. What are your parents, teachers and classmates doing every day? Is there anything that interests you? You can record these things.
& gt& gt Write your own feelings
Also pay attention to what has happened in the society recently, and then record your feelings and moods. For example, in the Yushu earthquake, what touching people and things did you know? What do you see when you take to the street? You can write down what you know and what you see.
After mastering the materials, it is not a good composition to pile up the relevant materials, but to grasp the key points and arrange the relevant materials reasonably, so that the articles are focused and the details are appropriate.
Skill practice of topic betting
Prediction of composition topics in the final exam of the fourth grade next semester
Prediction 1: We have various festivals every year. Do you have any special memories during the festival? Think about every festival you spend, think about what happened during the festival and write it down. Pay attention to the narrative in an orderly way, from beginning to end.
1. You can write about family activities in festivals.
For me, the most important thing is to pay a New Year call. Today is the second day of the first month, and the weather is very good. I follow my grandparents, my father and my little aunt to pay New Year's greetings.
You can write about the traditional activities in festivals.
Today is the Lantern Festival, and my parents promised to take me to the Yuyuan Garden to see the lights. As soon as we came to Yu Garden, "Wow!" Mother couldn't help crying. "There are a sea of people and bright lights!" " There are many strange lights hanging in it. Some are in the shape of a red sun.
It's like saying, "Hello, hello!" Some are like stars in the sky, flickering; Some are like a full moon; Some are like birds; Others are like fish playing in the water.
You can write some stories related to festivals.
Legend has it that after Qu Yuan threw himself into the Miluo River, the local people immediately rowed for rescue, and all the way to Dongting Lake, but Qu Yuan's body was never seen. In order to mourn, people rowed on the river, and later it gradually developed into a dragon boat race. People were afraid that fish in the river would eat his body, so they went home and threw rice balls into the river to prevent fish and shrimp from ruining Qu Yuan's body. Later, eating zongzi became a custom. Eating zongzi and racing dragon boats on the Dragon Boat Festival seems to be related to commemorating Qu Yuan.
Stories in festivals
1. Beginning: On the morning of May Day, I went to buy food for my mother.
2. In the middle: write in detail the process of buying vegetables, how to do it, how to think, and what kind of people sell vegetables. Experience hardship through narration.
Conclusion: Through this shopping, I got an inspiration that workers are the most glorious.
Prediction 2: With the rapid development of science and technology, many human fantasies have come true. Let's spread the wings of imagination, imagine the development of science and technology in 50 years and talk about our own whimsy. Write an imaginary composition on the topic of "Future _ _ _ _ _ _ _". You can write your own whimsy, something inspired by others, and a science fiction story.
1. You can write future items. For example, the pen of the future has many magical functions, for example, it can write without ink.
2. You can write "I" in the future, China in the future and human beings in the future. For example, it's 20xx, and this is China. The United Nations is issuing a certificate to the first female college student from China who boarded Pluto. She participated in the design of "Shenzhou 3 1" and was selected by the captain as a member of the space team. She is me.
You can write about the future environment. For example, if you plant this tree in the soil, just press the white button and the tree will grow tall and become a big tree at once.
Zuo Jia exhibition platform
Unforgettable party
In my five years of primary school life, there are many unforgettable things. They are like the shining stars in the starry sky in my memory. Next, I will choose the brightest star to show you-
That afternoon, our class will hold a big New Year's party. When I first entered the classroom, I was shocked and couldn't help crying. "Wow!" The layout of the classroom is beyond our expectation: all the ceiling fans are hung with colored stripes and balloons, and tables and chairs are placed around them. There is a performance in the middle.
We are all anxiously waiting for the program to start. At half past one, the program began: the first program was that all of us sang the song "Friends" together, and we all sang with great interest. Singing, singing, the scene in my mind where all kinds of friends want to part, how sad! However, happy notes are still jumping and exulting in the classroom. ...
The second program is Liu Yang's guzheng solo, with a beautiful voice, which intoxicated the whole class, as if they were in the palace of art and the ocean of music ... After the performance, the whole class burst into overwhelming applause.
If you want to say the third one, it will be even more exciting! It is the double spring that many people are familiar with. I only heard Wang say, "It is said that I have been to Jingyanggang Hotel ..." Before the words were finished, Wang Bo, the supporting actor, said, "American nightclubs." Wang then mixed the two sentences and said, "It is said that he came to American nightclubs." The audience burst into laughter and thunderous applause rang again. ...
The last one is the long-awaited irony. I saw Yan on the stage say to Ma Jiaxin, "I'm going to the market." Ma Jiaxin had to say, "The market patronized me." Everyone laughed, and some students didn't swallow a mouthful of water, but they all spit it out. ...
Finally, everyone sang "Auld Lang Syne", and the New Year's party ended with cheerful songs. ...
This party is really interesting.
& gt& gt Learning and using for reference
The little author begins with flashback, and compares unforgettable events to "stars", which is vivid and lively. Detailed scene description adds a lot of color to the article. The narrative process is clear and meticulous, bringing the joyful atmosphere of the whole party into the composition, which makes people feel immersive.
Shoes of the future
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With the progress of science and technology, new products are constantly appearing in society, and even shoes have become new.
The shoes of the future can change according to the size of your feet. The bigger the feet grow, the bigger the shoes will become, which will not cause beriberi and is very comfortable.
The shoes in the future can be warm and cold according to the weather, warm in winter and a little cool in summer. When it rains, it can be used as rain boots and when it snows, it can be used as non-slip shoes. Of course, it can be used as sandals in hot weather and cotton shoes in cold weather, which is very suitable for your needs.
This kind of shoes can not only change according to the weather and size, but also have good quality. Whenever your shoes are dirty, just gently say, "shoes, clean them quickly!" " "In the blink of an eye, the shoes are clean, and there is no need to scrub them. If your shoes are broken, they will be repaired automatically. You don't need to bother to repair them.
Please think about it. What if people's shoes don't fit well and fall off when walking? Don't worry, this kind of shoes won't fall off even if you don't wear a belt, because there is an invisible rope inside the shoes, so it won't fall off if you put it on. I believe that with the development of science and technology, people will definitely create this kind of shoes.
& gt& gt Learning and using for reference
After reading this imaginary composition, I can't help applauding the strange imagination of the little author. The article not only makes a bold and reasonable design for the future shoes, but also makes it clear in the narrative process, so as to take care of them from beginning to end. I believe that with the development of science and technology, our wish will come true.
Divide the materials well
Predict the focus of the topic
& gt& gt I first drew a note with a dog crawling on it. I had no choice but to lie on the ground and crawl a few times. Then my mother, she is very lucky. She learned to bark like a wolf, and she finished the task easily. Next, it is the general's turn. Dad simply picked up the note and opened it slowly. I leaned over curiously and couldn't help laughing. It turns out that dad wants to walk like a duck. Dad said awkwardly, "Let's change it." Mother said, "You are the head of the family. You can't go back on your word. " I gloated and said, "Just perform." Finally, my father thought about it and said, "Let's do it." I saw my father's shoulders clamped, his elbows bent, his heels moved inward, his toes were in the shape of Zhang Kaicheng's "eight-character" outward, he was half squatting, his mouth was screaming, and his fat body was rickety. His antics made my mother laugh to tears and hurt my stomach. Then, we performed sketches and musical instruments. ...
This special and interesting party made me feel happy at home, and I will never forget it. (Excerpted from Family Reunion)
& gt& gt Finally, dinner has started. I looked into the pot and it was bubbling. I immediately put a piece of ham in the pot ... I rolled my eyes. By the way, today is New Year's Eve, so you can't patronize yourself! I picked up the cup and stood up to propose a toast to Grandpa: "Grandpa, I wish you a happy New Year, congratulations on making a fortune, you make a fortune, I make a fortune-bring the red envelope!" Everyone laughed at my words.
I was eating soundly when suddenly there was the sound of firecrackers outside. I slid down from my chair and looked out at the balcony. "whoosh!" A spherical flame rose into the night sky, and then colorful fireworks soared into the sky. How beautiful!
Delicious and fun, can you be unhappy on New Year's Eve? (Excerpted from Happy New Year's Eve)
& gt& gt Press the second orange button, and the chair will magically turn orange. When you are hungry, just press it, and the chair will open a small window from the side and spit delicious fruit on the plate, so that you can have a good meal.
The third is green. If you drop any stationery, just press this green button and it will automatically pick it up for you and put it in the pencil box in the order you want, without any mistakes.
The fourth is cyan. In class, it will provide you with any paper continuously, but there is no need to cut down trees. It is convenient and environmentally friendly, which not only protects trees, but also greatly reduces the pollution to the earth.
The last one is blue. If you want to throw garbage, there are no garbage bags nearby. What shall we do? All you have to do at this time is move your fingers and press the blue button to see what happens! God, the chair is eating garbage! It sucks and sucks and sucks the ground clean. Then digest and absorb all the garbage in just five minutes. Do you think such a good chair is amazing? (Excerpted from "Chair of the Future")
& gt& gt Due to the automatic debugging function installed in the room, all of a sudden, soft natural light came out from the wall and ceiling, relaxed and melodious music filled the room, the negative oxygen ion generator gave off fresh air that can only be smelled in the Siberian virgin forest, the high-definition color stereo TV immediately began to broadcast the news of the day, and the self-controlled photo videophone also began to display the photo messages when I was not at home.
This is my place . Welcome to be a guest. (Excerpted from City of the Future)
Fourth grade final composition 10 days, how time flies? The final exam is coming again so soon! Speaking of that review period, it was really a lot of trouble!
Trouble 1: sea of people tactics
Needless to say, when reviewing, it is natural to do the paper. But we have done too much! On average, I have to do seven or eight papers every day! It must be very tiring to get home! This sea of people tactic really deserves its reputation!
Trouble 2: Too much homework.
"Nani? There are three papers, two pages of math problems and homework? Oh, no! " As soon as I finished my homework, I cried with other students! Can this homework be more! ? In the face of the teacher's "ruthlessness", we had to acquiesce. ...
Trouble 3: parents curse with iron rings.
What a tragedy! In the afternoon, I finally stuck my head out of the pile of paper piled higher than Mount Everest, and my parents beat me back mercilessly. Before going back, don't forget to "send away" a few words of "advice": "Daughter, are you complaining bitterly because of this little homework? Do you know there are seven subjects in junior high school? Seven homework! You only have three homework classes now, and you can't bear it? What should I do in junior high school? You can exercise now, so that you are caught off guard when you are in junior high school ... "In the face of my mother's several trains, I was speechless. ...
Alas, based on the above situation, the review stage is more terrible than the exam!