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Fourth grade landscape composition
In daily study, work and life, everyone is familiar with composition. Composition is a narrative method that expresses a theme through words after people's ideological consideration and language organization. Have no clue when writing a composition? The following are eight landscape compositions of grade four that I collected. Welcome to read the collection.

Fourth grade landscape composition 1 You came quietly. You show people the beautiful spring scenery and bring people a lively scene.

You come quietly and walk into the bamboo forest. Bamboo stands upright with thin and sparse leaves. Snow is unbreakable, and wind is unbreakable. Green, lush, green bamboo leaves one after another, dense, patched together into a huge umbrella, people enjoy the cool in the shade of green trees, play cards and discuss family affairs ... When the breeze blows, Sasha and the bamboo forest sing beautiful music. You came quietly and walked into the mountains. Pine trees stand proudly, like strong guards, protecting every corner of the mountain. Spring also awakened the peach blossoms, who scrambled to stick their heads out of the branches and exuded a strong floral fragrance.

Several cuckoos stood on the branches and sang loudly, breaking the silence in the deep mountains. They stopped for a while, and then sang with a new energy. Birds are singing everywhere in the mountains, echoing each other and playing a piece of music. You came quietly and walked into the pond. Fish swim around in droves. Some even jumped out of the water, tossed the water with their tails, and plunged into the water and swam away.

Beside the stone bridge, under the shade of green trees, a group of children of ducks are often seen playing in the water and diving into the water for food from time to time. Even if someone draws water on the shore, he is never surprised. You come quietly and walk into the grass. Spring awakened the grass. One by one, they looked out of the soil. Some are like shy little girls hiding in the ground and afraid to come out. The lawn is green, like a green carpet, like an endless brocade extending to the horizon, like a child playing with leather blown by the wind. How cute! I love you, Chun! I admire you, Chun! You are a beautiful season, a lively season.

There are no rows of towering teaching buildings in our campus, and there is no bustling scene like a big garden. It is simple, energetic and beautiful in our eyes.

As soon as I entered the campus, I was greeted by a relatively wide plastic playground. The red runway is surrounded by the inner ring of the green playground, and two green basketball stands are erected on both sides. The playground is surrounded by green "fences"-many small trees, among which holly is the most peculiar in shape, and some are like dancing; Some are like mothers putting their children to sleep; Some people stand like soldiers on guard. ...

Further inside, you can see the campus library at a glance. Bookshelves and bookcases are neatly filled with books, and walls and columns are neatly covered with excellent paintings and calligraphy, which makes people feel refreshed and pleasing to the eye.

Go through the library and turn right, and you will find Yang. Yang is surrounded by flowers and is very beautiful. There are green and vibrant bamboos by the pond. The breeze is blowing, accompanied by the rustling of bamboo leaves and the fragrance of flowers, which is really pleasant. The most interesting thing is the small fish in the pond. If you throw a stone to scare them, they will run away in a hurry, but soon, the fish will swim to the surface again.

Say goodbye to Yang and turn right. This is a lively little playground. There are many table tennis tables on the playground. Whenever class is over, there will be a thumping symphony here on time. ...

Look up at the milky white teaching building. It's morning reading time, and the sound of reading comes from every window.

Behind the teaching building is our canteen. At the entrance of the canteen stands a tall "giant"-a 60-year-old camphor tree. Summer is coming, and the aroma of camphor is refreshing.

So much for our campus. There is no strange landscape, but it is a sea full of joy.

A day's plan lies in the morning, and a year's plan lies in the spring. Beautiful spring makes the poet's poems flourish. Meng Haoran in the Tang Dynasty wrote: "In the early morning of spring, I woke up happily, and birds were singing all around. But now I remember that night, that storm, and I want to know how many flowers were broken. " Today, I want to talk to you about the spring scenery in my eyes-

Spring is indispensable for vibrant grass. Spring has come, and the grass is like an earth drill. It always drills up, pushes away layers of soil and finally germinates. "Wildfire never completely devoured them, but they grew taller in the spring breeze." I admire the tenacious vitality of the grass.

Colorful flowers are indispensable in spring. The first is the winter jasmine. Although its flowers are small, they are not very noticeable. However, it is like a spring forecasting machine. As soon as spring comes, it blooms yellow flowers, as if to say, "spring is coming, spring is coming!" People don't sleep late! " There is also a magnolia tree, whether it is magnolia or purple magnolia. Although it doesn't have the function of primrose, it can't become a painter, and its color is monotonous and short-lived, but it silently provides pollen for bees and selfless dedication like hardworking migrant workers.

Spring is indispensable for cool and warm spring breeze. It blew green grass, green saplings, wrinkled rivers and swelled buds. Sometimes it helps you get rid of the summer heat, and sometimes it helps you get rid of the cold. It is even worse than the air conditioner in summer, and it can blow away all the troubles with one blow.

I love spring, and I love the scenery of spring more-I want to embrace the whole spring!

Four Footprints in Autumn of Fourth Grade Landscape Composition

-Grasp the characteristics and describe them in an orderly way.

Teaching objectives

1, write the characteristics of autumn in a certain order, and the content should be specific.

2. Attention should be paid to arousing students' thoughts and feelings of loving nature and fully mobilizing students' enthusiasm for writing.

3. Cultivate students' observation and imagination by guiding them to observe, feel and express.

Teaching focus

1, guide students to write this exercise, and be sure to highlight the characteristics of autumn.

2. The statement should be fluent and coherent.

Teaching difficulties

Make students learn to "convey the spirit with form", and use rhetorical devices such as metaphor, personification and exaggeration to express the scenery as a living and emotional thing and write their own inner spirit.

teaching method

Observation method

teaching process

First, stimulate an interesting dialogue and introduce autumn:

Teacher: Students, the teacher said some words and poems. Students can guess which season it is: good years, you need to remember, the most are oranges, oranges, greens (the last half of the sentence indicates that the fruit is ripe), and moon cakes. Can you guess what season it is?

Health: Autumn.

Teacher: Good. Although the cool autumn has passed, it left a deep impression on us. Today, we follow the footsteps of autumn and start a composition about scenery.

Second, new funding.

1, the premise of writing autumn is to observe autumn carefully.

Teacher: We should choose a place we like as an observation point. The scenery of this place will have some obvious seasonal changes in autumn. What places did the students think of?

Health: Tianye Orchard Forest Park

Teacher: Well, these places will have different changes in autumn. The changes that have taken place need us to observe carefully and find its characteristics. How can we observe it to describe its characteristics?

Health: Look, listen, smell and touch.

Teacher: The students' answers are wonderful. The teacher writes on the blackboard (eyes-looking at the body-feeling cold-hands-picking fruit)

At the same time, we can also make a simple observation record, take photos or complete a sketch to find and record the footprints in autumn. When we approach autumn, we will definitely feel the coolness, colorful colors and harvest of autumn.

Master the method of describing autumn scenery.

(1) Learn to observe carefully, be good at discovering things that others have not discovered, and gradually develop the good habit of observing carefully.

The color of autumn-golden yellow

(2) When observing different scenery in a place, we should follow a certain order, such as: from top to bottom or from bottom to top, from far to near or from near to far, from all around to the center or from the center to all around, and so on.

Look! How beautiful are the clusters of maple leaves! At the moment, I can't help but think of Li Bai's poem "Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are redder than the February flowers". Yes, maple leaves are like our palms and chicken feet. There are many pinion-like edges on the leaves, which makes the unique maple leaves more beautiful!

From a distance, those leaves are clusters, clusters, clusters, like intimate friends whispering. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay, yellow is like gold and green is like emerald. They compete with each other and shine in the sun.

(3) Highlight the characteristics of autumn scenery. For example, autumn leaves not only have different shapes, but also show various colors because of temperature changes; In autumn, the fruit of the branches ripens and changes in shape, color, smell and many other aspects.

Example: A Apple tree is covered with red-faced apples, pears in Huang Chengcheng bend the branches, and oranges are covered with green leaves, like small lanterns hanging on the tree.

B The yellow grapefruit hangs on the branch, and the heavy grapefruit bends the branch, just like a little classmate on a swing.

C all the leaves on the persimmon tree have fallen, but the red persimmon still hangs on the branches, like orange lanterns of all sizes, bending the branches.

D When I went to Qiu Lai in summer, the grapes were ripe and a bunch of them hung in the gaps of the leaves. They are as crystal clear as crystal and jade.

Carved out, they look like huge purple pearls, all the water, which makes the population water DC.

E the earth put on a golden sweater, and yellow poplar leaves and bright maple leaves fell down, as if several colorful butterflies were flying in the air.

Get up early in the morning and get ready for Jiuxi.

I got on the bus and it started soon. I looked back and seemed to have left all my belts behind. I opened the window, and the cool breeze made me very comfortable. I can't help admiring: "What a wonderful world!" "

We arrived at Longjing and then walked to Jiuxi. I breathed the fresh air greedily, and my mouth couldn't close properly. Tree-lined paths, endless stream of people, and the thick fragrance of flowers and plants in the air feel like a paradise on earth. Leaves rustle in the wind and birds sing on the branches, which makes my mood happy. I'm glad to step on the mountain stream, ah! The water is clear and cool, and you can directly see the rocks under the water. Barefoot will make you scream because some stones are very sharp. A few small fish can be seen vaguely in the deeper water. They loom, get caught once, then hide and come out later. There is a fish that is so clever that I can't keep up. Finally, I caught it. There is also a small waterfall with many small holes of different shapes in the middle, where water can give you a massage!

Jiuxi is a paradise on earth with picturesque scenery and long grass and flying warblers in Cui Hua.

The scenery of Yuexiu Park in Jilin Province is pleasant, attracting an endless stream of tourists. On weekends, I go to the park with my parents.

Our family followed the tourists to the northeast corner of the park, and the first thing we saw was the oval fountain. In the middle of the fountain is a pink lotus, on which stands a white crane with its neck up. Water spouted from the crane's mouth, and the spouted water droplets were colorful under the sunlight, much like colored pearls! The water drops fell into the pool and made waves again. Although cranes and lotus flowers are carved from stones, their images are very realistic.

There are many flowers around the fountain, and colorful Chinese rose flowers are competing to open, emitting bursts of fragrance from time to time. A gust of wind blew, and the fragrance was stronger. People can't help but stop when they smell the fragrance and feel more comfortable.

On the left of the fountain is a red corridor. Under the promenade, someone is playing chess, someone is watching the scenery, and someone is drawing and sketching in the promenade. Old people are resting and chatting, children are running and playing, and some young people are absorbed in reading in the long corridor.

There is a rockery on the right of the fountain. The rockery is grotesque and made of stones. There are pavilions, golden glazed tiles, high cornices and bright red columns on the rockery, which are antique. The railings in the pavilion are painted with beautiful flowers and plants in four seasons, peach blossoms in spring, lotus flowers in midsummer, chrysanthemums in late autumn and wintersweet in the snow. What a beautiful pavilion!

I love the beautiful environment in the park, and I love living and raising my hometown-Jilin.

It was very cold this morning. I put on a thick cotton-padded coat and went outside to play with the children.

After a while, it began to snow heavily. I like snow best! Snowflakes like goose feathers fall in succession, and the earth instantly turns white, just like laying a white carpet on the ground. Some children have snowball fights, some make snowmen, some make snowballs, and they have a good time!

But the heavy snow just stopped in front of my favorite children, so I still can't bear to play.

I played from morning till noon, and the snow was slowly melted by the ruthless sun, so I had to go home with regret. I thought for a while, why does it snow today? Yes, it's winter!

Winter footprints are everywhere, as long as you look carefully, you will find them!

The scenery of the countryside is a painting; Green rice fields, from a distance, look like a prairie rushing across Wan Li; The river is like a mirror, and you can vaguely see the birds in the sky reflected in the water. Sometimes when the tip of a bird's tail touches water, it will see ripples rolling around.

Summer in the country is very charming; The original green rice has become the rice of Huang Cancan, just like an ocean. Looking at a beautiful rice field is like seeing an oil painting. Summer is also a day for tomato harvest. When I came to the tomato garden, I saw tomatoes like balls. Green and red tomatoes make a funny decoration, which is much cuter than a pair of stone lions squatting in front of a tall building or two upright flagpoles!

The sunset in the country is also a moving sight; Twilight shines on the lake, and the lake instantly becomes colorful and unique. The rosy clouds on the horizon, the evening breeze and the homing birds flying overhead are all good friends of the country people. Together with rural families, they painted a natural and harmonious pastoral scenery.

The night in the country is silent; At night, every starlight, night light, lake light and roadside lights cover the night. A sweet smell touched the tip of the nose. The edge of the night seems to have a hint of purple, interwoven in the night in the countryside.

The scenery in the countryside makes people linger. I love you, elegant and unique country!