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The form, spirit and imitation of beautiful sentences
1. Excerpt from the original text: At night, the enemy stared at this dark reed pond from the small window of the turret, and the stars in the sky seemed to be immersed in the water and were about to fall. Only in the middle of the night will waterfowl fly and sing in the reed pond. During the day, they will hide tightly in the bird's nest to avoid gunfire ... The target seems to be the sky. Imitation of Baiyangdian: In the morning, I stared at this seemingly unreal little garden from the French window of the library, and the irises in the garden seemed to be floating in the air and flapping their wings. By this morning, dew was rolling and swaying in the garden, and it was quietly scattered in the sky during the day without a trace. Bamboo is still growing straight. The spine doesn't seem to bend naturally. 2 Tung Flower Festival is selected from Xi Murong's classic works. Original: This afternoon full of white flowers always feels deja vu, and it always feels like an aggregation that can be put into any kind of time and space. It can be put into the Book of Songs, into Chu's ci, into classicism and into the pen of post-impressionism-there should be such an afternoon in any beautiful record of mankind. This early summer. Imitation: This morning full of catkins always feels deja vu, and it is a scene that can be put into any kind of time and space. It can be put into the notes of Tang poetry, Song poetry, romanticism and later country music. In any brilliant culture of mankind, there should be such an early morning and such an early spring. Woven into a soft net, covering the whole autumn world. The sky is dark, like the roof of an old house covered with cobwebs. The gray clouds piled up in the sky are like white powder peeling off the roof. -Zhang Ailing's Imitation of Autumn Rain: Snow, like white and smooth pieces of paper, flies into a thin yarn, covering the whole winter world. The sky is also white. It's like a vague mark on a white wall. On rainy days, the roof tiles are covered with wet streamers, which are gray and gentle, but when they meet, the light is dim and the backlight is dim, which is a low comfort for vision. As for the rain hitting the scale tiles, from far to near, there are light and heavy, and there are streams gurgling along the tile grooves and eaves, and all kinds of knocking and sliding sounds are closely intertwined. Her cold hands flicked countless black keys and gray keys on the roof, turning noon into dusk. -parody of "Listening to the Cold Rain": The house on a snowy day is shining with soft ice light, white and crystal clear, shining in sunny days and gentle in rainy days, which is an elegant enjoyment for the eyes. As for the snow that fell on the thousand needles, it was thin from top to bottom, with no trace at all. Whose wolf pen is waving the scenery. "It's snowing", the beautiful winter girl comes, and her white dancing shoes spin countless tangos and waltzes on the earth, turning the morning into night. When I walked into this forest, the birds called my name, and the dew exchanged eyes with me. Every tree is my bosom friend, they bring me infinite green, and every tree is looking at me. I leaned against a tree. As if I were a tree. -"Visiting friends in the mountains" parody: When I walked into this sunflower field, the dragonfly called my name and the butterfly danced with me. Every sunflower is my bosom friend, and they bring me infinite brilliance. Every sunflower is looking at me. I walked quietly beside a sunflower as if I were a sunflower. To taste nature is to taste the vast beauty. I remember once visiting Huading Mountain with my grandmother on the rooftop, and the car drove along the winding road to the top of the mountain. Looking out through the window, I saw a wonderful scene: green mountains are covered with greenery, clouds are lingering on the mountainside, and the mountains are covered with grotesque pines and cypresses. There is also a clear spring at the foot of the mountain, and the water is gurgling, which makes people think. There is really one. " All worldly matters and distractions have left me, leaving only a landscape painting that can never be finished, which is refreshing. -Imitation of "tasting nature": tasting nature means tasting elegant and peaceful beauty. I remember once returning books to the library and walking slowly along a cobblestone path alone. I looked up and saw a charming scene: dense branches and leaves covered the sky. On the left is a unique bamboo forest, rustling in the wind. On the right is the purple iris, which is full of flowers and makes people linger back and forth. There is really a feeling of "straying into wonderland". At this moment, the noise and dust of the red dust have left me, leaving me wandering in this illusory fairyland and unable to come back for a long time. She blocked the cold with wide clothes, but lifted heavy fruits and gave them to the world.

You all love autumn. Her sky is crisp, her clouds are bright and sunny, and her fragrance is everywhere. Autumn makes farmers smile brilliantly.

I compare spring to a poor imitation: I compare spring to a little girl with a color palette. Her colorful oil paintings erase the pallor of winter and give the world green and hope; She used the brush in her hand to bring a breeze and golden sunshine to shine on the earth. You all love spring, her flowers, her grass, her rain and everything.

Spring makes people feel particularly happy. 8 original sentence: I can't get tired of watching horses running in the desert grassland; Looking at the kite flying in the blue sky and the white sails fluttering in the trough, I can't get tired of watching it; I can't get tired of watching the trains roaring over mountains and mountains on the earth ... I can't get tired of watching their heroic running, galloping style and roaring whirlwind of vitality.

Imitation: I can't get tired of seeing camels crossing the sand desert; I never get tired of watching those fights in the mountains.

2. Appreciating famous works and good sentences and imitating his face can be said to be ugly, so we have to give up.

We are also ashamed of ourselves. We don't want to describe the tetrahedral nose, horseshoe-shaped mouth, small left eye blocked by thatched brown eyebrows, right eye completely covered by a large tumor, castle-like upper and lower rows of broken teeth, lips covered with pulp residue and showing an ivory incisor, cracked chin, and especially the expression that hangs over all this.

-Hugo Notre Dame de Paris This is a wonderful portrait of a deformed man. His head, face, eyes, nose, mouth, hands and body are different from normal people.

It can be said that it is a collection of deformed people all over the world. He is also disabled, camel, lame, one-eyed and dumb.

In ordinary people's pen, disability is always associated with weakness. However, in Hugo's works, this disabled limb contains strength, courage and the power of giants. He seems to be a "broken giant statue that has not been properly pieced together", and this description is unique.

Well-known experts say that the characters in the Water Margin are all wonderful through the ages, and they are all distinguished by similarities and differences. Such as Lu, jy, Ruan Xiaoer, Shi Xiu, Hu and Liu Tang. , are all acute. They are all described and portrayed, each with a cast, each with a scene, each with several families, each with an identity, exactly the same, and half mixed up. It's free and convenient to read, and you don't have to look at their names.

-Zhou's "Water Margin" is called the epic of the peasant revolutionary war in feudal China, and there is no shame. Although there are still some original defects in the stage of speaking and speaking, it has basically possessed the scale of a modern novel. It has typical characters with distinctive personalities. Although it is a comic book, it has a relatively complete and coherent story. In its artistic description, it is intertwined with social life pictures of a specific historical era.

3. Imitate and appreciate good sentences. Appreciate and appreciate the imitated good sentences searched by parents on Baidu. Purpose: Inspire thinking, broaden the associative space, and open the thinking mode of imitation questions 1. Write a paragraph according to the underlined sentences and the rhetorical devices used.

Hurry up and be filial to your father. Maybe a mansion, maybe a brick.

Maybe it's a swan on the other side of the ocean, maybe it's a message close at hand. Maybe it's a pure black doctor's hat.

Maybe it's the red five in the exercise book. Maybe it's a table of delicious food, maybe it's a wild fruit and a small flower.

Maybe it's a gorgeous skirt, maybe it's a pair of clean old shoes. Maybe tens of thousands of dollars, maybe just a coin with body temperature.

2. Take "love" as the statement object, take "spring water" and "ballad" as metaphors, imitate the following sentence patterns, recreate two sentences, and form a set of parallelism sentences. Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; Love is a clear spring flowing in the desert, which makes thirsty people feel the rebirth of life; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.

3. Write a sentence according to the underlined sentence below, so that the two sentences are semantically related and the sentence patterns are neat. It is good to have, but don't dim your life because of loss.

Without the sun, you will still have starlight. Without starlight, you will still have spiritual guidance. It is conceivable that Qu Yuan could not write such a brilliant chapter as Li Sao without losing the luxury and ease of life. Li Yu has not lost the dignity and splendor of the emperor, how can he sing such an immortal heart song as river of no return?

4. Fill in the appropriate words in the lines below. Anti-writing sentences should conform to the meaning of the text and be connected smoothly.

If the autumn wind didn't blow the seeds off the stems, wouldn't the seeds be frozen? It is autumn wind, introducing leaves to roots, and letting them find their mother to continue their life; It is the autumn wind that hides the seeds in the thick soil and gives it a hotbed of spring; It is the autumn wind that brings the fruit into a warm home and keeps the embryo of life. 5. Write another set of sentences on the horizontal line according to the form of the following sentences.

Requirements: ① Take cultural celebrities or characters in literary masterpieces as materials. ② The number of words is roughly the same as the example.

Without Feng Youlan with a long beard, Zong Baihua without aesthetics, Wu Zuxiang without witty remarks, and Yao Yao without a pipe in his mouth, the unnamed lake will certainly be much more lonely. 6. Imitate the example, choose one from Lu Xun, Ba Jin, Lao She, Cao Yu, Shakespeare and Balzac, and write another paragraph.

(Requirements: the sentence patterns are roughly the same, and the number of words can be increased or decreased) I salute you, Bing Xin. Your "send it to young readers" raised me.

From then on, no hatred can pull me into the abyss, only the guidance of childlike innocence can bring me into the kingdom of love; Nothing can make me depressed, only an optimistic attitude can drive me to the other side of success. 7. Write a set of "Write to hometown" sentences in the form of "Write to alma mater".

Write to your alma mater: you are eternal music, and I am your flying note; No matter which poem I import in the future, your melody will beat in it. To my hometown: you are a warm harbor, and I am a sailboat sailing out of your arms; No matter which dock I dock in the future, there will be one of your navigation lights flashing on the dock.

8. Fill in the appropriate sentences on the horizontal lines of the following paragraphs. Requirements: (1) The sentence structure is the same as the sentence structure with horizontal lines, forming a parallel sentence.

(2) The specific context conforms to the context. The beautiful landscape prose written by the writer is like an enthusiastic and experienced tour guide: it will take you up the winding path, it will take you to appreciate the colorful sea of clouds in Huangshan, it will take you to visit the crystal clear Lijiang River in Guilin, and it will take you to watch the rapids of the Yangtze River.

9. Write two sentences according to the underlined sentence pattern, with the same sentence pattern and the same number of words. Television also has its advantages.

Today, it has become an important channel for thousands of Qian Qian people to contact with the outside world. In other words, the screen is an excellent window for you to spy into the unknown world.

You can't go to the scene of the civil war in Congo. It can take you there and let you know the latest situation of the frontline trenches. You can't climb Mount Everest, can you? It can take you there and let you enjoy the magnificent scenery of the peak. You can't meet stars often. It can take you there and let you witness the style of idols on the stage. 10. Imitate the following sentences and write two other meaningful sentences.

The song of my hometown is a flute in Qingyuan, which always rings with the moon at night. The song of my hometown is a light kite, flying in the sky of a foreign land forever; The song of hometown is a kind call, which will always ring in the hearts of wanderers.

1 1. Imitate the following sentence patterns and write another set of sentences in anthropomorphic form. You need to select a new description object with complete meaning.

Fire, flash, jump, slide, wander, as long as there is enough oxygen, it can burst into radiant light at any time and space, constantly simulating itself and copying itself. Snow, dancing, spinning, falling and accumulating, as long as it is at a suitable low temperature, can be condensed into the magnificent scene of the original wax image in any environment, constantly strengthening itself and expanding itself.

12. Write two sentences on the horizontal line below it according to the following sentences, and ask the three sentences to be related to each other. If the seed is afraid of being buried in the soil, it may never feel the thrilling feeling when the bud breaks through the soil.

If the young eagle is afraid of being hit by wind and rain, it may never realize the grandeur of its wings when fighting in the sky. If children are afraid of the test of setbacks, they may never gain the maturity and heroism when they cross the fog.

13. aphorisms sometimes use the method of "antonym * * *", which stand out from each other and show profound truth. Please refer to the following two examples and write two aphorisms with the method of "antonym * * * use".

Example 1: Error is often the forerunner of correctness. Example 2: Failure is the mother of success.

Small cleverness often shows great stupidity; Indulge in the joy of success may brew the pain of failure. 14. imitate the following example, choose another object (both people and things can be used), and then write a set of sentences, the number of words can be slightly increased or decreased.

For example: you have your rough and heroic, and I have my gentle and steady flow; You are used to traveling thousands of miles between mountains, and I like to flow slowly around small villages. You're DJI.

4. Excerpt and imitation of good sentences ● Rainy roof tiles, with wet ribbons, are gray and gentle, with dim sunshine and dim backlight, which is a low comfort to vision. As for the rain hitting thousands of scaly tiles, from far and near, it is gentle and heavy, with a trickle flowing down the tile trough and eaves. All kinds of tapping and sliding sounds are closely woven into a net, and whose fingers are massaging the helix. "It's raining", the gentle grey beauty came, and her cold hands brushed countless black keys grey keys on the roof, turning noon into dusk.

-"Listening to the Cold Rain"

Imitation: The house on a snowy day shines with soft ice light, white and crystal clear, sunny and gentle drizzle, which is an elegant enjoyment for the eyes. As for the snow falling on the thousand needles, it is thin and thick from top to bottom, and a little snow falls along the trunk and needles. All kinds of big snowflakes and fine snow overlap into a picture, whose wolf pen is waving the scenery. "It's snowing", the beautiful winter girl comes, and her white dancing shoes spin countless tangos and waltzes on the earth, turning the morning into night.

When I walked into this forest, birds called my name, and dew exchanged eyes with me. Every tree is my bosom friend. They bring boundless green to my face, and every tree is looking at me. I leaned against a tree quietly, as if I were a tree.

-Visiting friends in the mountains

Imitation: When I walked into this sunflower field, the dragonfly called my name and the butterfly danced with me. Every sunflower is my bosom friend, they bring me infinite brilliance, and every sunflower is looking at me. I walked towards a sunflower, quietly, as if I were a sunflower.

● The original sentence: I can't get tired of watching horses running in the desert grassland; Looking at the kite flying in the blue sky and the white sails fluttering in the trough, I can't get tired of watching it; I can't get tired of watching the train whistling on the earth. ...

I can never get tired of hearing their heroic running, galloping style, tireless vitality and roaring whirlwind.

Imitation: I can't get tired of seeing camels crossing the sand desert; Looking at the pine trees standing proudly on the hillside and the plum blossoms blooming in the cold, I can't get tired of seeing them; I can't get tired of watching those weeds that are drought-resistant and barren and grow smartly on the earth.

Their forbearing attitude, unyielding backbone and strong perseverance praise, I never tire of hearing them.

● Original: To taste nature is to taste the vast beauty. I remember once visiting Huading Mountain with my grandmother on the rooftop, and the car drove along the winding road to the top of the mountain.

Imitation: To taste nature is to taste the beauty of elegance and tranquility. I remember once returning books to the library and walking slowly along a cobblestone path alone.

● Looking out of the window, I saw a wonderful scene: green hills are stacked on top of each other, clouds are lingering on the mountainside, and the mountains are covered with grotesque pines and cypresses.

Imitation: Looking up, I saw a beautiful scene: dense branches and leaves covered the sky, light and shadow jumped among the leaves, and on the left was a unique bamboo forest rustling in the wind.

There is also a clear spring at the foot of the mountain, and the water is gurgling, which makes people think. It really feels like "people are traveling in a world of pictorial". At this moment, all the mundane things and distractions that have disturbed me have left me, leaving only a landscape painting that can never be finished, which is refreshing.

-"Taste Nature"

Imitation: On the right, there is a purple iris. The flowers are overflowing, making people linger back and forth. It really feels like "entering a fairyland". At this moment, the noise and smoke of the world of mortals have left me, leaving me wandering in this illusory fairyland and unable to come back for a long time.

I compare autumn to a fairy in a golden dress. Her light sleeves brushed away the heat of the sun and sprinkled light and freshness on the earth. She blocked the cold with wide clothes, but lifted heavy fruits and gave them to the world.

Imitation: I compare spring to a little girl with a color palette. Her colorful oil paintings have erased the pallor of winter and brought green and hope to the world. She used the brush in her hand to bring a breeze and golden sunshine to shine on the earth.

You all love autumn, the sky is crisp, the clouds are light and the wind is light, the sun is shining and the fragrance is everywhere. Autumn makes farmers smile brilliantly.

Imitation: You all love spring, her flowers, her grass, her rain and everything. Spring makes people feel particularly happy.

I hope it helps you.

~ I hope to adopt it in time ~

5. Recite a good sentence and a good paragraph. YanTaitai has never been like this. If she sees us eating ice, she will definitely smile and say, "OK, have another piece. I will remember to see who eats more. "

Appreciation: A few plain words have shaped a "good guy" who often encourages children to do bad things behind their backs. The description of language and manner makes the image of this lady lifelike.

However, YanTaitai never complained. He immediately mixed gouache with soju and put it on a knot in one's heart, saying that it would not only relieve pain, but also avoid scars in the future.

Appreciation: Compared with other adults, YanTaitai's image of a good man immediately stands out. This sentence uses a series of action descriptions to show YanTaitai's concern for us and our children's love for her.

Less than a month later, I heard a rumor that I stole something from home and sold it, which really made me feel like I fell into cold water.

Appreciation: It is vivid, concise and powerful to describe one's state of mind when being wronged with vivid rhetoric.

I know the source of the rumor. Now whenever there is a place to publish, I always scold the gossip fox tail, but I was too young at that time. When I encounter gossip, I even seem to feel guilty, afraid of looking at people and being caressed by my mother.

Appreciation: I always feel the same way when reading this sentence. I was really like this when I was a child. I am timid when I am in trouble. What's the problem? Think about yourself first. Only when I grow up, I won't be so unclear about cracking down on rumors.

Not only do the students in Class Three go to the lecture hall with a pile of thick and big foreign documents, but they are not the only ones who dare to face them squarely. Open your elbows even if you are empty-handed, like a crab. The lower classes can't get out of the back door before him.

Appreciation: Lu Xun's brushwork is very sharp. In just a few words, the arrogance of the students in the first two classes is vividly portrayed. The rhetoric of metaphor, vivid expression and description of action also reveal the author's deep contempt between the lines.