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The most attractive thing is writing a composition.
1. What attracted me to write a 450-word book?

Many things are very good and popular with everyone, but I am not interested in them, only books attract me.

Gorky once said: "Books are the ladder of human progress." If the book is an ocean, then I would like to be a fish and swim freely in the ocean of knowledge; If the book is the sky, then I would like to be a bird soaring in the sky; If storytelling is the ladder of human progress, then I would like to be the one who walks on it.

Before writing, I feel ashamed, because there is too much knowledge in the book, so-called learning is endless!

This book let me know that classmates should unite and help each other; This book tells me that we have been insulted before; This book makes me understand that I should love my motherland, study hard and become a pillar of my motherland when I grow up.

This book saved my friendship with my good friend for five years. Once, I quarreled with my good friend. I stopped playing with her in a rage. I went to the library and read a book on Sunday. I understand that students should help each other. I shouldn't apologize for my face. After reading this book, I apologize to my good friend, and our friendship has deepened.

My friend, read more books, and you will find gold you have never seen before.

Of all the interesting things, only this book attracted me because I found gold in it. I will continue to dig for gold. Do you want to dig with me?

2. Write an attractive composition topic, plus grandma who loves "nagging" composition.

My grandmother is 58 years old this year. She is of medium height and always likes to wear a brown coat and a green apron around her waist. Those wrinkled eyes. Whenever she smiles, she smiles from ear to ear. At this time, you can see that there are only a few "guards" left in her mouth-front teeth. My grandmother is a lovely nag. Once she nags, she never stops. Grandma's nagging is accompanied by growth, but I still like her nagging.

Although grandma likes nagging, I never hate her. Once, grandma went out shopping and came back a little late. At home, grandpa said a few words to grandma, and grandma took pains to start chanting. "Shopping today is really tired! There was another traffic jam on the road, and I finally bought so many things. You didn't help me, but I'm exhausted from making this old woman do so many things. Now that I am old, I can't do anything well. I came back late today. I wanted to come back for a hot meal, but you didn't do anything. I have to do it myself. A family can do anything, and I don't know when I will be tired!

At this time, my sister came back from school with her schoolbag on her back. I did my homework for a while and clamored to watch TV. Grandpa didn't allow me, and grandma came out to help me: "Son, you should focus on your study!" " "You are only grade three, and you have to go to junior high school, high school and university. There is still a long way to go! What should I do if I don't study hard and have no knowledge and can't go to college when I grow up? Nowadays, college students never watch TV. No wonder people study so well. Finish your homework, read books, review your lessons, do exercises, study hard, and then learn TV, do you hear? My sister had already blocked her ears tightly, and when she saw that grandma was gone, she took out the cotton stuffed inside and said, "What an old horse!" " "Grandma began to nag again when she heard this sentence. If you don't listen to grandma, you are not a good boy. There is some truth in what your Excellency said. You should listen to adults. After listening, my sister had to bury her head in the pile of books reluctantly and continue her study.

Advice is hard to listen to since ancient times. Grandma is a little nagging, but that nagging poured her feelings for us. I hope grandma's "nagging" can accompany me all my life!

How to write a composition describing things, which is more attractive to primary school students? One day, my parents and I climbed Xiangshan.

After getting off the bus, we are going to have a rest at the foot of the mountain. When my parents are resting, I just wander around.

Just then, a green thing flashed in front of me. I didn't care, so I went after it. I wonder what kind of bug it is. It flies so fast.

I ran faster and faster because I was so curious that I didn't even know my leg was cut. The worm finally stopped flying and fell to the ground.

I didn't feel tired at all, so I quickly squatted down and took a look. Wow! Look carefully, it's a locust. It's a female, and it's sowing! Its whole body is green, and its two tentacles are swinging back and forth.

Although I was only a sophomore at that time, I already knew it was a warning: "leave quickly, or I will attack!" " "I watched it lay eggs motionless, and my legs were numb, but I still refused to move. Later, when I was tired of squatting, I just sat on the ground.

When my mother found me, I knew my leg was hurt and bleeding.

4. The most attractive seventh-grade writing composition is my happiest thing.

I am happy when the sun shines into the window every day; After some hard thinking and solving the problem, I am happy; I am very happy when I see others smile because of my help. I am a person who loves to create happiness. Happiness will flow and spread because of me or you. Happy because of happiness; Be happy because of happiness.

The head teacher will hold a debate in the class. For a little girl (boy) like me who has a glib tongue, it is another good opportunity to show her talents.

The topic of this debate is "Is reading beneficial?" . The positive view holds that "reading is beneficial", the negative view holds that "reading is not necessarily beneficial", and the pros and cons are freely chosen by students. Faced with the seemingly unbreakable truth that "reading is beneficial", most students have joined the positive camp and become eloquent debaters, and ordinary students are willing to become their support groups. The view that "reading is not necessarily beneficial" is difficult for many students to stand on. Seeing this scene, I volunteered and took the initiative to choose the opposite side. Seeing my choice, "Wenbo" Susie and "geek" Zhang Hangbin also joined the opposition camp. Only a dozen students have the courage to be our support group, and our situation is very serious.

The debate began. First, a classmate named "Lark" appeared in the square. This is a heavyweight debater. I saw her posing as a host, getting straight to the point, and going straight to the theme "Reading is endless, writing is like a god, and whether reading is beneficial is self-evident."

Seeing the aggressive posture of the square, "geek" is not to be outdone. To avoid its sharpness, he pretended to be slow. "Reading is not necessarily beneficial. According to the investigation in the juvenile detention center, many juvenile delinquents embark on the road of crime by reading unhealthy books. Is this good for reading? " The answer of "geek" and his unique humorous actions attracted bursts of applause from the students.

The two sides revolved around their own viewpoints, namely "Wenbo", "Lark", "Geek" and me ... They took turns to go into battle, and the scene was very intense.

Slowly, we took the initiative. In order to consolidate the excellent situation we have achieved, I put forward the most fashionable point of view: "Now is the high-tech era, and we have many channels to acquire knowledge. Television and the Internet provide us with enough knowledge and nutrition. Do we have to read books? " When I was feeling smug, our judges suddenly said, "Yes, there are many bad things in the cartoon Crayon Shinchan, so don't learn it!" " . That's great. Another "lark" immediately grabbed the handle of * * and said, "In that case, let's watch less TV and read more." I am really angry and funny to see the idiots in our battalion. My in the mind secretly scold this * *, the key time out of the question. Suddenly I had an idea: "my opponent, today we are debating whether reading is beneficial, not whether watching TV is good." In the end, the rhythm of the debate returned to our control. ……

After two heated debates, the debate ended. Teacher Zou made a concluding speech: "Today, both debaters spoke positively. The two sides expressed their opinions around their own views, which were well founded. Their performance was wonderful. Both sides have their own merits and are inseparable. But judging from the whole scene of controlling the debate, the opposing side performed better. I think the winner of this debate is the opponent. "

Although this is not a formal debate, I still feel very happy in my heart!

The feeling of the first day

With the passage of time, today we are no longer children playing house on the grass; Today, we are no longer primary school students who read aloud "the bright line at the foot of my bed"; Today, we bid farewell to childhood and move towards youth. With a vision for the future, we came to the High School Attached to the National People's Congress and entered the first day of life.

It's been a month since I started school, and I have a certain understanding of the new environment. There are also many feelings about life in the first grade.

On the first day, the first feeling is freshness. The campus is so clean and tidy, tree-lined; The teacher's lectures are so energetic and fascinating; Students get along so well, so happy; Modern libraries, audio-visual centers, network centers and laboratories make me linger. All this is very different from primary school, but I think it is very fresh and interesting.

On the first day, the second feeling was longing for the future. At the opening ceremony, we excitedly tied our best wishes to balloons and flew them into the blue sky. Everyone's wishes are varied, some want to be musicians and push China's traditional music to the world; Some hope to become journalists, so that all mankind is amazed at the rapid development of China today; Some people want to be writers and let people hear the faint voice in the corner of society ... The ideal can only be realized through action. In the three years of junior high school, lay a solid foundation for the future and move towards the goal step by step.

The first day, a little more emotion will make you nervous. In middle schools, especially excellent middle schools, the competition for study is fierce and there will be some pressure. If you are not careful, your grades will fall behind the team and you can't relax at all. You should always be in a state of learning. We must adapt to this tense learning atmosphere in order to achieve results in three years of study.

On the first day of junior high school, I was both excited, expecting and nervous. But anyway, let's start from bit by bit and integrate into a new life. Let's face the first day of life with a high-spirited attitude.

5. Food attracted me. Is it food? I'm glad you like it. I'll give you some model essays for your reference. It's a little long I hope to use delicious steamed bread. People often say that steamed buns are delicious, but I haven't tasted them and I don't know what they taste like.

This afternoon, my parents took me to the steamed stuffed bun shop to open my eyes and eat. I finally got what I wanted that day. Steamed bread is whisked, thin skin, there seems to be a bag of juice inside. They are small and exquisite, shaped like pagodas, translucent and strong, crystal clear and yellow, and the fragrance at the top of the tower overflows with the wind, shaped like steamed bread. No wonder it's called steamed buns.

Generally, there are ten steamed buns in a cage. Each steamed bun is like a small snowball, but there is a pothole on it. I was intoxicated before the aroma came up. I can't wait to swallow the whole steamed bread in one gulp.

A cage of steamed bread came up and I sat in the chair. Steamed bread gives off a faint fragrance. As soon as I smell this fragrance, I can't help but gulp it down.

Hardly had he picked up a "chubby" and stuffed it into his mouth when he began to fight back. My stomach is growling with hunger at the moment, and I want to open my mouth wide and swallow four steamed buns in one gulp.

So I carefully picked up the steamed stuffed bun with chopsticks, because I took a small bite and the juice ran into my mouth like a tribe. I dipped it in a little vinegar and put it in my mouth. The meat is loose and soft. As soon as I chewed it, its meat suddenly loosened and it was delicious. My mother said, "To eat steamed stuffed buns, you should first dip in vinegar, gently bite a hole, suck up the delicious soup inside, and then eat the skin and meat."

The delicious essence of steamed stuffed bun is in the soup. I eat according to my mother's method. The soup is fresh, thin and tender. It is really delicious.

I really don't know if I won't eat steamed stuffed bun for a while, but once I eat it, I won't forget it. I wolfed it down.

Its meat is full, and a mouthful of fresh, thick and salty makes you want to eat. So I pestered my mother to buy another guest. How can I put it down when my aunt brought it with a smile? After eating one mouthful after another, I was full of fragrance and smacked my lips. I couldn't help but admire: "Beauty! It's really delicious. "

Blink of an eye and wiped out, touched the bulging belly, added a mouth, the rest is unfinished. How's it going? Are you excited? It's better to run around and eat steamed buns at home! This is the unique local snacks in Jiangnan in winter.

When I was young, I ran to the street after school. Of course, this is when I have money in my pocket. Cross the alley, cross the bridge, and you can smell the fragrance.

Shang Yuan is a thin old man with white eyebrows and beard. He always carries heavy burdens. The burden is actually a box made of wood. There are stinky tofu, soy sauce, Chili sauce and a bunch of small plates in front of the box, and there is a canned bottle with several pairs of chopsticks in it. There is a small coal stove and a pot in the back box.

The old man always stands on the street corner, absorbed in frying stinky tofu. I haven't heard his shouts, but there are always many diners looking for incense in front of his little bag and standing in a circle.

His stinky tofu is very distinctive. At first glance, it's dark and no different from other stinky tofu, but once it's put in the pot and taken out of it, it becomes golden and delicious, coated with a layer of soy sauce or Chili sauce (his Chili sauce is homemade, bright red, spicy and comfortable), yellow and red, very beautiful. Take a bite carefully (because it's very hot). It's yellow on the outside and white on the inside, crisp on the outside and tender on the inside. It's hot and spicy. At this time, instead of eating, I rolled my tongue and swallowed.

Old people always fry only a few slices at a time, and sell a few slices after frying, so people waiting for them are eating and others pay attention to each other. Most people who eat fried stinky tofu are women and children. It's really strange that women in Jiangnan don't eat spicy food, and when it comes to this burden, they all become "spicy girls" They have to put on a thick layer of Chili sauce, and women don't care about tenderness at this time. They ate until their lips were red, their tears were mixed, and they were hot and sweaty.

The old man just kept saying: it's too spicy to stick, don't eat too much. After all, he didn't stop it

So the old man consumes a bottle of Chili sauce every day. At that time, my father gave me fifty cents a month, and at least half of the money was contributed to stinky tofu.

A piece of stinky tofu is worth a penny, and after eating one piece, it will be quiet in one day. Sometimes I don't plan to overspend. I will restrain myself from running there for fear of long hooks in my eyes.

However, at that time, as long as I accidentally slipped onto the old man's burden, the old man would always see everything, as if he found that I didn't have a penny in my pocket, and he would smile and fry the most crisp and tender piece for me to eat. Sorry to eat for free. Dad will send me money next month, and I will return it to him immediately. The old man also accepted it, but he must fry me an extra piece of stinky tofu.

It has been more than 20 years since I left that small town in the south of the Yangtze River, and I have never eaten such delicious fried stinky tofu (although I have eaten fried stinky tofu in other cities in the south of the Yangtze River, the taste always seems to be a little worse). It always appears in my dreams, with the thin old man with white beard and white eyebrows who doesn't even know his name.

I've only eaten meat and bone porridge once. It was a Sunday morning in winter in Jiangnan, and my thrifty aunt suddenly offered to take me to eat meat and bone porridge.

I was flattered and followed her all the way for fear that she would suddenly change her mind. Go along Qingshiban Road, cross the bustling food market and turn into an alley.

Far away, I saw a small shop with white fog, and I heard the sound of an iron spoon knocking on the edge of the pot. My aunt led me into the shop, which was full.

Everyone is sipping this meat and bone porridge, which seems really delicious. The proprietress led us into the inner kitchen and said apologetically, "Let's eat here."

The proprietress is a 40-year-old woman with ear-long hair and a black hairpin carefully pinned behind her ear. I was afraid that menstruation would get cold feet and run away, so I quickly made my own decision and said, "Yes, yes."

As a result, menstruation got two dirty eyes. "Ok, a bowl of meat and bone porridge."

The proprietress grabbed the big iron spoon in one hand and uncovered the big pot cover in the other. Suddenly, a heat wave swept the smell of porridge. She stirred the pot with a big iron spoon and handed me a big bowl of porridge.

This bowl of porridge is gray.

6. How can I write something attractive and provide you with some writing methods, which I hope will help you:

First, observe carefully.

Careful observation is the golden key to improve the writing level. The article is the product of objective things reflected in the author's mind. To reflect the object, you don't have to observe the objective things carefully. Only by careful observation can we find broken jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena and grab the shining treasure from the mixed sediment. If you don't master "observation", the golden key to open the door, the "iron gate limit" of the composition will definitely be impossible.

Second, read more books

Extensive reading is the premise of improving the level of composition. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading is like a million volumes, and writing is like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, I can't write poems and I can't sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocates reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like bees, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring. " We emphasize that we should not only read more, but also read selectively, and even more, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles we read, and master the composition from them, so as to be more profound and diverse.

Third, clever selection of materials.

Careful selection is an accelerator to improve the level of composition. The requirement of material selection is novelty. The so-called novelty means that the batch should choose something that ordinary people have never touched, or turn a blind eye to it with profound meaning. Once the author writes in a book, it will make people think deeply about exciting materials. The angle of material selection should be small, we should see the big picture from the small place and write the materials in everyone's eyes instead of what everyone wrote. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize various materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can the materials be novel. And this kind of positive thinking and repeated deliberation is very helpful to improve the level of composition.

Fourth, practice writing often.

Regular writing practice is the key to improve writing level. Want to enter the door of composition, make continuous progress, and more importantly, practice more. As the saying goes, "it is better to write one than to read ten articles." This tells the truth that writing practice produces true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods and writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and make it our writing ability. In fact, we can all practice writing after learning the first text. However, fragment practice is a good way to practice writing, which takes a short time and achieves the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. Keep a diary every day, and then the Russian foundation will be solid.

Fifth, review frequently

Repeated revision is a catalyst to improve the level of composition. Revision is an essential step in composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of composition. The predecessors said well, "the article is never tired of changing." "The article has changed." Cao Xueqin wrote a dream of red mansions, read it for ten years, added and deleted it five times, and Tolstoy's War and Peace was revised seven times. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after deciding and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." It can be seen that article revision generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. When repairing, we should do five things: whether the text is fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, "the article has changed." Generally speaking, the article is always getting better and better, so we should work hard on "revision".

7. On the junior high school composition of gifts, the topic should be attractive, not less than 500 words, and the gift should be urgent.

Up to now, I am still alive. In just fifteen years, I have made many friends, and many friends will also give me some gifts. As for what gift it is, the passage of time has long been forgotten.

A gift is given by one friend to another. It is a symbol of mutual friendship. It represents the friendship of truth, goodness and beauty and conveys the expectation of mankind. Is sacred. When a person gives a gift to another person, it shows that he is friendly to you. He will be your friend and he will help you. Even a trivial gift is precious. If you believe, what your friends give you is absolutely wonderful, not even bought with money, but made for you with your own efforts. Because he believes that friendship is pure, what you buy is not made by yourself and cannot represent your own mind. The gift you made is the best! There is an ancient saying in China: A thousand miles to send goose feathers, courtesy is light and affection is heavy! For example, a person really made a gift for you, even if it is not very beautiful, it is very rare!

In fact, a gift can be anything, a word, a greeting, a pencil. . Both are good! After all, it represents a heart and a feeling. Do you know the power of a word? A word carries weight. If you have a pair of friends you haven't seen for years. One of them suddenly received a greeting from a friend. At that time, that friend will be very happy and will unconsciously recall the past events that happened to them. He must think this gift is the most precious!

For gifts, we should cherish them. If it is true, maybe he will cherish the gift you gave him. Put the gift carefully in the box, and then put the box in a hidden place. Of course, only oneself can know this place. Such a treasure has a certain sense of security, significance, treasure and preciousness. It is very rare to do this.

Maybe it's too much trouble! If you are a generous person. You can generously put the gift in the most conspicuous corner of the room. You can even show off to your friends at home. Show it to the guests. They will definitely say that you have a good interpersonal relationship. Give you a thumbs up! In this way, you will also feel happy. If I can enjoy such treatment. I must be flattered. I can't help feeling a sense of pride I am proud of this gift and feel happy. Besides, you can see these gifts as soon as you enter the room every day. It can make you miss your friends, remind you of the best time in your life and make you happy. Great!

Gifts are precious! I don't need any historical records, the only unforgettable thing is.

8. Composition, the most attractive beginning (so it is suspense) "The text looks like a mountain, not like harmony!" It is human nature to like the new and hate the old, and to be curious. Then, how to make the beginning of the composition more suspenseful, make the plot waver and produce breathtaking artistic effects, so as to quickly stimulate readers' interest in reading?

First, edit a wonderful clip.

A successful film and television director often puts the most exciting, thrilling and * * * at the beginning to attract the audience and improve the ratings of film and television dramas, and so do many screenwriters. When writing a composition, we should also have the consciousness of putting the most wonderful content at the beginning, and strive to make the wonderful beginning catch the reader's eye quickly. Please look at the beginning of the perfect composition "Polar Challenge":

"hurry up! Stop! The third one on the right, fingers close to the pants seam! " "You-stand up, stand up and don't move, just stand for me all afternoon! Did you hear that? " The coach is lecturing the boys severely in front of me. Look at those boys. They are always cocky at ordinary times, and they are more fierce to girls. At this time, they all became sheep.

Such as thunder's roar, severe criticism and sharp contrast, only three or two sentences soon stuck to the readers, making them want to stop and can only read on obediently.

Second, put forward the topic of thinking

This is the most routine and suspenseful beginning of the composition. If the question you ask has the value of thinking, it can produce a strong visual impact, open the reader's mind, and also produce great artistic charm, which makes people want to stop. Please look at the beginning of the perfect composition "My season is my master":

Young people in the flower season, can you put aside the control of your parents? I am the master of my season and my site.

With this Millennium problem, I crossed just visiting and drifted to the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. I want to ask Confucius and Qu Yuan how they answered this Millennium puzzle.

At the beginning of the article, a serious question was raised, which left a suspense in a few words. At the same time, words also give people a heavy feeling.

Third, show an important object.

Many articles skillfully choose a clue that runs through the whole text. This clue can be a person, a thing or a thing. If you let this person, this matter and this matter appear at the beginning of the article with some "mystery" or "eccentricity", it will also be fascinating. Please look at the wonderful beginning of the perfect composition "That scene makes me unforgettable":

"Extra, extra, there is a letter from sister Wenchuan with a photo inside!"

The quiet noon was thus broken. Quiet voice is naturally sharp, she deliberately picked up the voice, full of confidence, particularly shocking. A few boys, plus a few "wild girls", couldn't help it. A group of "lunatics" rushed out to grab the letter. Even a few guys who slept soundly cried bleakly, "What's the matter? What's the matter with this * * *! "

You must have been held back by this mysterious letter, too. Are you anxious to know what's in it? With the reader's guess, the article is carried out in suspense all the way, closely following the reader's attention.

Fourth, create a typical environment.

Every story needs an environment for its occurrence and development. If you describe the story scene directly at the beginning of the article in detail, or carefully create a bleak or beautiful or quiet atmosphere, and put the reader in this environment skillfully, it will also be very attractive. Please look at the beginning of the perfect composition "I can't forget that scene":

The biting cold wind is blowing, coming at me from time to time, and occasionally naughty little snowflakes fall, just like dancing. Walking on the road, I think dad who is doing business outside should go home, right?

"The Bitter Wind" and "Naughty Little Snowflake" create a cold and silent atmosphere with only two sentences at the beginning, which is fascinating.

Look at the beginning of the perfect composition "Wujiang River Water Overlord";

The turbulent waves of Wujiang River are still clearly discernible. It keeps rolling, telling people endless feelings of overlord. ...

The power of Xiang Jun is pulling the mountain, but the lonely water is powerless. Although I was defeated, why did I abandon my concubine and cry?

From the very beginning, the article plays up a tragic and desolate atmosphere, cleverly putting readers in a distant ancient battlefield, such as hearing their voices and watching their scenery.

In short, there are many ways to start a composition, and how to firmly attract readers at a glance is the most important. Students should try their best to choose the opening form suitable for the genre, structure and theme of the composition, and strive to arouse readers' interest in reading at the first time.