First, the word order is improper

1. Improper composition position There are many things used by Zhou Enlai in Nanchang Bayi Uprising Memorial Hall. In the sentence (Item A, Question 6, Jiangxi Volume), the word "multiple" should be placed before the word "thing" and the word "thing" should be defined directly.

2. This drama, produced by powerful forces and improper terms, not only shows the overall progress of China opera, but also shows a gratifying step taken by China opera on the road of modernization. "People not only saw ... but also saw ...

Second, improper collocation.

1. Improper collocation of subject and predicate Since the birth of 1993 Beijing University Student Film Festival, more than 1 10,000 people have attended the movie. The subject "654.38+00,000 person-times" in the sentence (Item A, Question 3, National Volume) is not properly matched with the predicate "participation in movie viewing", and the latter sentence can be changed to "the number of people participating in movie viewing has exceeded 6.5438+00,000 person-times".

2. Improper collocation of animals (culture medium) and animals (culture medium) may lead to iodine deficiency in lactating women if they only rely on iodine content in supplements. If iodine-containing food is not added in time, it may lead to brain injury or mental retardation in infants. The verb "take" in the sentence is not properly matched with the object "iodine content" (item A of question 5 of Zhejiang Volume), so "iodine content" should be changed to "iodine content".

3. Inappropriate match between host and guest Comrade Li Mingde was repeatedly rated as an advanced training unit and a model logistics support unit during his tenure as battalion commander and colonel. The subject "Comrade Li Mingde" in the first sentence is not properly matched with the object "Training advanced units and logistics support model units", so the first sentence can be changed to "the battalion and regiment that Comrade Li Mingde took when he was a battalion commander or head of the regiment".

4. Whether Scientific Outlook on Development can be implemented through improper collocation of one side and two sides is undoubtedly of great significance for building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development. There are two aspects of affirmation and negation ("whether") in front of the sentence, and only one aspect of affirmation ("establishment and promotion") is mentioned later. In order to take care of the front, you can delete "whether".

Third, the composition is incomplete or redundant.

1. Incomplete composition (1) The incomplete theme in this work does not give people much positive encouragement and enlightenment. On the contrary, some plots have many negative effects. The prepositional structure "in" (2) The view of legal experts with incomplete objects is that consumers smash goods in public only to humiliate or vent their dissatisfaction. The verb "shame" in the sentence (Item D, Question 4, National Volume 3) lacks its matching object, so it should be supplemented with objects such as "businessman" and "operator".

2. Extra ingredients If the "leisure" things I manage can bring even a little happiness and happiness to the masses, I am also very happy and happy. This sentence is a compound sentence with a hypothetical relationship. The "time" in the first clause destroys the integrity of the sentence structure and should be deleted.

4. The colorful waterfall with chaotic structure is located in the depths of a mountain in Niru Village, Shangri-La County. A plateau snowmelt river named Nilu River and steep peaks created this amazing spectacle. The object of the first half sentence is "waterfall", and the second half sentence is changed to "rivers and peaks". The second half of the sentence can be changed to "This spectacular scene was created by a plateau snowmelt river and a steep mountain peak named Niulu River.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) is ambiguous.

1. The water on the mountain is precious, so we leave it for people who come at night. If you break the sentence "night" into "night", it means "night"; If it is broken down into "late/coming up", which means "mountain at night", you can change "late" into "late" or "after".

I'll persuade my teacher to go with you this time, so that you won't be too nervous and you can play better. If the "harmony" in the sentence (Jiangsu Volume 4 Item B) is understood as a conjunction, the object of "persuasion" is "teacher and you"; If it is a preposition, the object of "persuasion" is only "teacher"

3. This relationship is multiple. He rides a motorcycle every day, from east to west, from south to north, and collects 180 waste films from more than 80 hospitals, photo studios, publishing houses and other units bit by bit. "180 or more" in the sentence (Item A of Question 4 of Guangdong Volume) can not only restrict "hospitals", but also restrict "hospitals, photo studios and publishing houses", and "180 or more" can be converted into "units".

The teacher praised himself at today's class meeting, but I think we need to continue to work hard. The word "oneself" in the sentence (Item B of Question 4 of National Volume 2) can refer to both the speaker and the teacher.

Sixth, illogical.

The Municipal Education Commission requires that the daily necessities and bedding of student apartments in each school be purchased by students themselves and shall not be uniformly equipped. The "articles for daily use" in the sentence (item B of the third question in the national volume 1) contains "bedding", which is associated with "harmony" and makes a logical mistake of juxtaposing big concepts with small concepts. Although the test questions about distinguishing and modifying sick sentences change every year, their proposition ideas and basic models have not changed. Judging from the scope of the examination, there are examination questions to identify sick sentences every year, and there are also exams when modifying sick sentences. Judging from the characteristics of the test questions, the identification of sick sentences generally appears in the multiple-choice questions in Volume 1, and the modification of sick sentences generally appears in Volume 2. Judging from the source of ill sentences, the ill sentences selected in the test questions are generally representative language diseases that people often appear in language communication. Judging from the structure of the test questions, each question examines the ability to identify and modify sick sentences from different aspects, and the same language disease generally does not appear twice in the same question at the same time.

Selected test questions

1. The sentence that is not wrong in the following sentence is () A. The "knowledge economy" revolution supported by network technology has greatly changed our production and lifestyle and accelerated social civilization. The lighting in Mountain B will change from "lighting up" to "beauty up", and the goal of making the lighting "moving" is being implemented. C. Reading articles often aims at screening and extracting valuable information, or drawing opinions, or collecting arguments, or feeling the emotion of the article. According to the idea suggested by the teacher, we successfully solved this difficult problem.

2. There is nothing wrong with the following sentence: () A. The ticket price of Dazu Stone Carving is not high, which is very unfavorable for the protection of cultural relics, and it is impossible to effectively use price leverage to control the overloaded passenger flow. B. The dialectics of life is complementary and opposite. The whiter the thing, the easier it is to show the polluted black dirt, and the easier it is to be polluted by the black dirt. C. Money will corrode some artists, induce them to give up their aesthetic ideals, stifle their artistic personality and become spiritual hired workers, which will inevitably damage the social value of their works. D. After graduating from college, I did various jobs and finally became the deputy general manager of Pudong Real Estate Exhibition Center.

There is nothing wrong with the following sentences: () A. The development of science forces anti-science people to wear pseudoscience masks to oppose science. B Narrative expresses the theme through the description of characters and events, and it mainly expresses the author's thoughts and feelings through images. C. The latest wave-shaped toothbrush can penetrate up to one third of the teeth than the ordinary flat toothbrush. D. after jiajing in the Ming dynasty, the world went from bad to worse Corruption is considered normal, but incorruptibility is ridiculed. Therefore, when an official leaves office, people often judge his ability by the weight of his official bag.

4. Because of the inconsistent theme, the context of the following paragraph is incoherent. Please make some changes where appropriate to make the meaning of the text coherent. But now some people take a blind attitude, without analysis, regardless of right and wrong, and regard all foreign cultures as treasures. Some of these schools and creative methods are regarded as overseas treasures by some people and worship them. A:

5. Find out two mistakes in the language expression of the following words and correct them.

At the Spring Festival Gala in 2005, led by Tai Lihua, 2 1 A thousand-handed Guanyin performed by the deaf amazed the audience. Under the exquisite stage lighting and background music, the actors gave a vivid performance, which attracted thousands of audiences. These deaf-mute people not only shocked people with their graceful dancing, but also with their tenacious perseverance and persistent pursuit of life.

Reference answer: 1.c. A is incomplete, and "the process of" should be added at the end. B improper collocation, change "target" to "plan". D is out of order, and "Shun" should be changed to "Solution" instead of "Basis".

2. B. One sentence is out of order, "very unfavorable to the protection of cultural relics" and "unable to effectively use price leverage to control overloaded passenger flow". The subject in c is incomplete. The subject of the first, second and third clauses is "money", while the subject of the fourth clause is incomplete. The D sentence is mixed and should be changed to: "Finally, I served as the deputy general manager of Pudong Real Estate Exhibition Center".

3.d .a is illogical. It's not "putting on the mask of pseudoscience", but "putting on the mask of science". C "at most one third" is not clear, whether it is on the original basis or on the final result.

The subject of the original topic is "some people", so "some schools and creative methods are influenced by some people" should be changed to "even some schools and creative methods".

5. Example of error correction: The first place is that "exquisite stage lighting and background music" is changed to "gorgeous stage lighting and wonderful background music". The second place is that "vivid performance" is changed to "exquisite performance".