In the big forest by the sea, there lived a female monkey. Mother monkey has three children. The boss told the monkey to be obedient and honest; The second child is a monkey, smart and thinking. The third child is a girl. Her name is Monkey Beauty, and she is very beautiful. One day, the mother monkey called her three children and gave them 100 yuan each, telling them to leave home and live independently to see who could live a rich life. Ask students to expand their imagination, write stories in detail, and draw up their own topics.

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Expand your imagination according to the story provided, make the story concrete and vivid, and write the result clearly. Can be carried out according to the following steps.

1) the personality characteristics of the characters, to analyze and scrutinize everything they have done, the eldest monkey obeys, and maybe do something big with the 100 yuan given by the monkey mother; The second monkey is smart and loves to use his brain. He may work miracles with 100 yuan given by his mother. The third monkey is very beautiful. Because of the love of beauty, maybe in a few days, the 100 yuan given by my mother will be spent, and even she herself will wander around ... students can make up more wonderful stories without restraint.

2) Although it is an article that unfolds a story, it cannot be imagined aimlessly. It is better to take real life as the prototype and write around a certain center, which will be more reasonable.

3) Details, pay attention to the cohesion between paragraphs. Because this article wants us to imagine what the three children of the monkey mother did respectively. Therefore, it is up to us to decide who should focus on everything according to the need of expressing the central idea. After determining the priorities, we should also pay attention to the cohesion between paragraphs, that is, we should make a good transition between paragraphs to make the article organized and more story-telling.

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Three monkeys broke into the sky.

150024 Harbin No.3 Power Generation Co., Ltd. Grade 4: Zhang Yi

In the big forest by the sea, there lived a female monkey. Mother monkey has three children. The boss told the monkey to be obedient and honest; The second child is a monkey, smart and thinking. The third child is a girl. Her name is Monkey Beauty, and she is very beautiful.

One day, the mother monkey called three children to her side and gave them one hundred yuan each to leave home and live independently to see who could live a rich life. The three children listened to their mother's thoughts. The boss looks happy, the second is happy, and the third is a little unhappy. She doesn't want to leave her mother.

Under the persuasion of the monkey mother, there was no way, so the three children had to leave home with the 100 yuan given by their mother and live independently.

The monkey rented a house after he left home. After a while, the money my mother gave me was almost spent, so I thought, if this continues, I will become poor, and I should find a job. So he got a job as a postman. Because he is honest and dutiful, he does whatever the boss tells him to do, so the boss likes him very much and has been giving him a promotion and a raise. Finally, the boss retired. He became a boss and lived a rich life.

But the second is not as lucky as the boss. Just one hundred miles out of the house, I met a mountain thief, and one hundred yuan was robbed. Along the way, he had to beg for some food. When he arrived in the county seat, he happened to meet his brother, borrowed some money, opened a restaurant and started a small business. At first, the business was not bad, and I could earn more than 1000 a month. But then a big fire destroyed his restaurant, and he managed to escape from it. Looking at the burnt-out restaurant in front of him, he could hardly live.

The third monkey beautiful first used this 100 yuan to buy a lot of brand-name cosmetics and rented a house. After more than a month, the money has been spent. She feels too tired from work and stays at home every day. When she was hungry, she begged for food.

A year later, the three children returned to the monkey mother one after another, and the boss held a thick stack of RMB in his hand; There are only a few thousand dollars left in the old second hand; There is nothing in the third hand. The money of Big Brother and Second Brother is earned by hard-working hands. But the third one is poor because he only knows how to dress himself and doesn't know how to work. Hey, remember: there is no pie in the sky.

I have a smart and gentle mother. She has short black hair, a pair of big eyes embedded under her eyebrows like moon buds, a straight nose, a small talking cherry mouth and a sweet smile revealing two rows of white and neat teeth. My mother also has a pair of dexterous hands. She washes my clothes, folds the quilt and cooks every day ... and always cares about me and my family. I love my good mother!

Mom is like the ever-changing "weather", always changing herself because of my performance. When I do well in the exam, my mother's face will show a sunny smile: when I do my homework so-so, my mother will be furious and set off a storm; When I waste my time doing something boring, my mother will talk like a drizzle … but I know that my mother is good for me and loves me.

I remember once, my mother and I were playing badminton. At this moment, I don't know what I stepped on, my foot slipped and I fell down. When I got up from the ground at once, I found a big hole in my beloved Mickey Mouse pants. I'm so sad that I can't bear to throw these pants away.

Mom, what a resounding name. How many days and nights, my mother has been with me, guarding me; How many days and nights, my mother worried about my tomorrow; How many days and nights, my mother cares about me with her loving eyes ... Looking at a few more silver wires on your head, I want to say, "Mom, you have worked hard, I love you!

3. Give more exercises to the expanding materials of primary school students' compositions. The number of words is the best Butterfly's happiness is to have a pair of colorful wings; The happiness of flowers is to give off a fragrant smell; The happiness of the sea is to collect sunshine ... My happiness is to live happily with my family.

Happiness is as ubiquitous as air. Dad brought me happiness.

Dad snores loudly at night, and I'm a little annoyed. However, I can't help feeling guilty when I think that my father goes out early and comes back late every day and tries to make money just to make my mother and I live better.

From my father's snoring, I heard the sound of happiness. My mother brought me happiness.

I failed in the exam, and my mother didn't scold me, but patiently analyzed the reasons for the wrong questions and taught me to remember the mistakes. Never doing it again in the future is the greatest progress. Every night, my mother and I study together. Sometimes, she can't help yawning in order to dictate words to me.

Looking at my mother's haggard face, I saw happiness. Grandma always brings me a small cake when she picks me up, for fear that I will be hungry after school.

I eat the cake bit by bit. I tasted happiness from a small cake.

Happiness is a euphemistic song; Happiness is an intriguing painting; Happiness is a warm and soft poem; Happiness is a bridge to communicate family ties ... Happiness is a special kind of love, which makes me learn to be happy and grateful.

4. Mom's lyrics are expanded to 600 words. Mom cried that day! I don't know how to get up early Really! "I take it out on my mother.

The most unforgettable thing is that I was going to be late that winter, and I was no exception. Your flowers in the rain broke my umbrella. All wearing cotton-padded jackets? Is this really me? I recalled the past bit by bit ... when I finally said "I'm sorry", my mother shed tears again. It was a cold winter without snow, I don't know.

Mom only has 1. Later, I learned about your new schoolbag.

At that time, it was almost the Spring Festival. Someone called you and I talked about my mother. My mother is silent! Mom rushed out and said, "It's still early, it's still early, and mom is still concentrating on making delicious breakfast." I was filled with unhappiness and pursed my lips. My mother works day and night, not all for me, but for this family. Someone brought it to you. My mother was ill that day, so she accidentally slept for a while, but she thought of cooking breakfast for me. She just got up.

As for me, I said irritably, "I won't eat." "Man, I'm so ignorant. Afterwards, I was still full of energy, that is, I had to be full of energy and stand up straight. Your wronged tears will be wiped away for you ... "After listening to Yan Weiwen's mother, I can't help thinking of her.

It's getting late. Someone will get it for you. Mom gets up before dawn to make breakfast for me.

I got up half awake, stretched myself and yawned. Obviously, I didn't get enough sleep. Mom has already done it in the kitchen? Your mother isn't? At this time, "I don't have the courage to apologize to my mother for your new schoolbag!" " Is this me? Your flowers are broken in the rain. Just a moment, wait a minute! "So he went in again.

Later, I caressed my head and said, "You are grown up and sensible ..." Motherly love is boundless, and someone beats you while drinking hot soup, but I don't understand my mother's concern for me. I am also angry with my mother! "Mother worked day and night and lost her temper. Someone (he) gave you a package of (that) three fresh stuffing that you like, and someone (he) gave you a package of (that) three fresh stuffing that you like. 6 meters, but it looks very energetic. Mom always tells me! It's so late.

5. Topic 2: I love my mother.

I have a gentle mother. She has a pair of watery eyes, a low nose, a small mouth, a pair of heavy eyebrows and waterfall-like black hair.

Once, my mother got a disease called gallstones. My back often hurts, so I go to the hospital for examination. After the examination, the doctor said that there was something swelling in my stomach. I don't know what it was and I need to be hospitalized for observation. The doctor arranged her mother in a special ward, and the nurses took turns to look after her, which made her particularly moved. It's time for lunch. The meal in the hospital is not ready yet. I was afraid that my mother was hungry, so I said to her, "I'll buy you a box lunch." Say that finish, I hurried out. At this time, it happened to be raining heavily, and I ran in the heavy rain for fear that the box lunch was sold out. So, I worked harder, ran faster and faster, and finally ran to the place where I sold lunch boxes, leaving only the last box. If I'm a minute late, someone else will buy me. Back to the hospital, I handed the box lunch to my mother, who praised me as a good boy, and then wolfed it down.

I don't need my mother to return my love to my mother. Love is powerful, the greatest and most selfless in the world. I want to shout loudly: "Mom, I love you!" " "

Article 3: My mother

I have a kind mother. Next, let me take a picture of her with a "language camera"!

She has big eyes and double eyelids. There is a stern mouth under the slightly tilted bridge of the nose, and he is not tall. My mother's hands are rough, because my father is on a business trip and all the housework is done by my mother. For example: cleaning, washing clothes, etc. How can her hands not get rough? However, it doesn't matter if my hands are rough. When her hand gently patted me to sleep, it would also bring me warmth and let me fall asleep gradually.

Usually my mother is very concerned about my study methods. No matter how busy I am, she will carefully check my homework and patiently teach me questions that I can't do. If my homework is sloppy, she often reminds me to be more careful. She comforted me: "In fact, you are also very good. If you get rid of this problem, you will be better. " After listening to my mother, I made up my mind to correct this careless bad habit. During the summer vacation, my mother knew that I was very tired from studying, so she took me to travel and increase my knowledge. I learned a lot outside.

Because I love my mother and I know her. My mother cares about me so much. I am proud of having a good mother.

Article 4: My mother

My mother is the most beautiful in my eyes. She is not tall and wears a ponytail. Her mouth is small, her nose is not high or low, and her eyes are black and bright, looking like a god.

Mom has a bad temper. If I am wrong, my mother will be angry. Once, my mother severely criticized me for making a mistake in math. Another time, I played with my brother and accidentally made him cry. My mother also criticized me and asked me to apologize to him.

Mom cares about me very much. Last time I was sick, when I went to bed at night, my mother got up to take my medicine and take my temperature. I want to repay my mother with my good grades.

Mother is a diligent person and has been working. Do housework at home, teach children in kindergarten and go to school by yourself. I'm too busy to handle. But I am not relaxed in my study of 2. I check my homework and signature every day.

Mother doesn't like keeping pets, and she doesn't like watching TV. I read books whenever I have time and take me to the library every other week.

Mother likes to eat fish, and I say she is a kitten; Mom likes to chew bones, and I say she is a little black dog; Mom likes to eat pork. I said she was a little tiger. Mom is not picky about food. I want to learn from her.

I think my mother is very nice, and I like her very much.

Chapter five: My mother.

My mother is the most beautiful in my eyes. She is not tall and wears a ponytail. Her mouth is small, her nose is not high or low, and her eyes are black and bright, looking like a god. Mom has a bad temper. If I am wrong, my mother will be angry. Once, my mother severely criticized me for making a mistake in math. Another time, I played with my brother and accidentally made him cry. My mother also criticized me and asked me to apologize to him. Mom cares about me very much. Last time I was sick, when I went to bed at night, my mother got up to take my medicine and take my temperature. I want to repay my mother with my good grades. Mother is a diligent person and has been working. Do housework at home, teach children in kindergarten and go to school by yourself. I'm too busy to handle. But I'm not relaxed about my study at all. I check my homework and signature every day. Mother doesn't like keeping pets, and she doesn't like watching TV. I read books whenever I have time and take me to the library every other week. Mother likes to eat fish, and I say she is a kitten; Mom likes to chew bones, and I say she is a little black dog; Mom likes to eat pork. I said she was a little tiger. Mom is not picky about food. I want to learn from her. I think my mother is very nice, and I like her very much.

6. Write a short essay of about 600 words according to the materials. The school organized a spring outing. JASON ZHANG asked his mother to buy cakes. On Sunday morning, I got up early. Seeing that my mother is still sleeping, I decided to be a housewife for a day.

What should I eat for breakfast? I thought about it, opened the refrigerator and immediately had an idea: drink soybean milk and eat cake. So I took out a small pot, rinsed it, then poured the soybean milk into the pot, and then covered the lid. After a while, the soybean milk boiled. I quickly turned off the fire, then pressed the handle with a wet cloth and poured the soybean milk into two small bowls. I took the peanut chocolate cake out of the refrigerator, cut it and put it neatly on the table. I gasped, and the task was completed! When I was about to wake up my mother for breakfast, she was attracted by the strong smell of soybean milk. She smiled and said to me, "My son is great!" "My heart is full of joy. I feel very happy eating my own breakfast.

How time flies! It's time for lunch I arranged to eat jiaozi at noon. I took out two bags of "Wan Chai Wharf" dumplings from the refrigerator and put them aside. Then I took out a big pot from the cupboard, took half a pot of water, put it on the gas stove and lit it. The water boiled and I put jiaozi into the pot one by one. I learned my mother's usual method of making jiaozi, stirring and adding water several times. After jiaozi cooked, I fished out jiaozi with a spoon and put it on a plate. Only then did I find that there were some crumbs in the two sets of jiaozi, so I quickly put the crumb jiaozi into a bowl and asked my mother to eat it. Mother saw the broken jiaozi in my bowl and said with a smile, "My son is so sensible!" It's delicious to eat jiaozi cooked by yourself.